rate_review Reviews

Please tell me you are going to write some more to this story because I just Love reading this and I can wait to see what going to happen next.I also can't wait to see what happens at the dinner party.

I am horribly embarrassed that you added a new chapter in April and I just now found out. I see things are starting to come together. I hope Weiss isn't supposed to protect such sleaze bags as these Andersons who pimp out their son. I'm looking forward to all the fireworks when Sasha and Aya finally meet. Though sporadic, this story is awesome in scope and concept. Poor Nagi. Wish he could take Chas with him when they move on. Finally, someone who can understand him. And boy is Schu in for it...and not in a good way. Great chapter--sorry I didn't read/review until now. Thanks for bringing it back from limbo.

Um... oops?

*cackles* Busted!!!!

Is it wrong to want more of this? Well, any of your Weiss stories actually....

*howls with laughter* Love Chasity! Love! Love! LOVE!!!!

She's a hoot and it would be wonderful to see her there as Nagi's "date"...

Loved this! Poor Nagi is going to need therapy by the time this is over - either that or he has found his soul mate. I wonder if Brad and Schu would mind a daughter?

Very informative chapter. So the Andersens are in up to their teeth? I love Chastity and the added dimension she brings to the plot. Too bad Nagi hasn't always had a friend like her. I can barely wait until Sasha and Aya meet! I'm enjoying this story so much! I am amazed again at how well you do dialogue. Maybe short, but there was a lot revealed in this chapter. Brilliant, as usual!

Ah, so Sasha gets the news first. What devilish plans to thwart Weiss will come out of this? I think Aya will be a match for them, what with lethal stilettos and knife throwing, but the other Weiss may be taken by surprise. Really, though, I still expect Sasha and Aya to bond on a different level that neither the Black family nor the White family can comprehend. Excellent writing again. Short but moving the plot along. I'm on the edge of my seat!

Oh yeah.. I wanna see the "Whites" meet the "Blacks" *cackles*

*snerks* Omi and Nagi shaking their heads and going to hang out with telepathic Miss Crane while the "adults" end up playing Spy vs Spy a la MAD magazine....

Just the thing to give me a giggle on this Wednesday of evil. You are a joy, Phoenix. And Farf clearly can't be allowed near the crayons anymore.

Awwww! I was happy for Schuldig that he was getting it on with Brad (remember Yohji's predicament at the present) then he got busted. But at least the interruption didn't stop the action. Nagi's little friend better clear her phone's memory before a snooping parent or peer sees the video and notices that his 'mother' has a few extra parts that most moms don't have! I love your humour! What's worse than fighting? Maybe to a fifteen year old. Excellent construction and pacing, but the suspense is killing me!