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for Mission: Midwest: Schwarz

by vbruce

person Tazzy
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*howls with laughter*

*gasps for breath*

Okay, each time I didn't think this could get any funnier, it does......

*cackles* Oh, can't wait to see Nagi explain what he was doing with a neighbor's daughter while on a mission.
person katami
schedule April 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Phoenix, that was the only thing that made getting up today worthwhile. Love it! You are a brilliant, wicked woman and I love ya for it.
schedule March 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is juicy! A fellow 'freak' has him pegged instantly. She could be a great hindrance or a great help to Schwarz's mission. Maybe Nagi will see a little action while they are in small town America. Please keep this story going, it's the funniest thing I've read in a long time. Well written. Ah, your imagination knows no limits, and I guess my depravity doesn't either. Can't wait until the two redheads meet ... at the party?
person Tazzy
schedule March 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*blinks* *blinks* *blinks* Mrs. GOtta Poke My Nose Into Everyone's Business has a Goth lesbian *telepathic* daughter???

*cackles* Serves her right! And Schuldig's gonna flip over that, isn't he? Someone to talk to and terrorize Mrs. Crane...

*smirks and waits for next chapter*
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 4

"Of course she's gorgeous. She's German."

I NEARLY DIED!!!
I love this. I can't wait to read more!!
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What can I say? This is getting better and better each chapter. I never would have thought Schuldig could discipline himself to fit in so well and not blow their cover or the mission. I love how Brad is already treating him as the little fraulein. He is sure to reap the benefit of the expensive clothes in other, less clothed ways. So now we know the target but not _why_ they are the target. I can hardly wait until he meets Aya. Talk about a cat fight! Excellent dialogue, great pacing. Fabulous, of course! Oh, and your story, too.
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hee! I nearly die laughing every time I read an update to these stories. Please, please keep them coming.
person Tazzy
schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*cackles* and the Weiss Kitties start making an appearance. Oh, it's going to be fun with Aya and Schu meeting in drag!

And more of the mission appears. *snickers* this just gets better and better....
schedule November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am loving this story, as well as it's counterpart. I've never giggled so hard while reading fanfic!
person katami
schedule November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too funny for words, darling! That is a whole new take on the terrible twos.

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