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I enjoyed this story a great deal. Though logically, it would make more sense to end with a galactic orgy. ^_^

Probably best sailor moon hentai fanfiction ever. I'm under impression. Thanks to this story I was inspired to write too.

WOW! This is really well-done, a little bleak of course. You are an awesome bad end writer. Do some mind control or gently bad end some time :)

Definitely enjoyed this Darkfic. It's rare to see a darkfic with a true 'Bad End'... 2 thumbs up.

Althou, there is the odd thought of the Dark Moon family plotting to strike back further in time with more time travel shenanigans. The Moon Kingdom also had a queen. ^_^

Glad to see you're still active. Thanks for the update.

And, still super disturbing, but then that was sort of the point, wasn't it? Not sure that lined up with where the "split off" cliff-hanged, though, but whatever. I would point out that you never had the Black Moon capture the Outer Senshi, and I'm pretty sure they would step in eventually to fight. Just saying. Well, until we finally have yet another chapter of "Jadeite's Revenge" then. Laters.

I know it's not likely, but I really think you should continue Sailor Moon's captivity with Demando! I think you're a brilliant author, and the way you masterfully handled the Sailor Senshis' captivity with amazing description AND depth, I think a Demando/Sailor Moon story would be complete LOVE. It would however be alot more tame than this story, since Demando loves Sailor Moon and wouldn't torture her (hell, he won't even force himself on her), but I think there's alot of potential since Demando thinks Sailor Moon will eventually come around, and the threat of Tuxedo Mask coming to rescue her could play into that somehow too. Just my thoughts (and fantasies XD). Anyways, coming back to BMT, I'm actually glad that you ended this on a "happy" note; as much as I enjoyed the enslavement and all, I'm glad the girls got a chance to fight back and win their freedom (my inner feminist calls for girl power!). Their characterizations were spot on, and I'm glad Emerald got what she deserved, woot woot. Again, incredible job (and I mean, INCREDIBLE), and I will definitely be moving on to your other stories! :D

Just finished the story and I've got to say, this is a very good Sailormoon darkfic if I ever saw one - you have my praise! :).

All things considered though, I was rather surpised that you made it a rather happy ending in the end (well, not quite happy as such, as it's left rather open - but at least, they managed to escape). With the curcumstances beign as dark as they were, I was sure that the things were headed towards a "bad" or even "dark" ending, but instead the opposite happened. Not a bad thing though as I'm at heart a sucker for happy/good endings even in dark circumstances - and if thew author manages to surpise his/her reader, then that's usually a good thing too :) . Nonetheless, I sure wouldn't mind seeing this alternative ending you mention, where things presumably ends a lot worse for the girls...

Excellent story. The characterization, scenes and everything else was richly detailed. Never let anyone say you're not skilled!

Shame it had to end so quickly, but there was much enjoyment had and it ain't like you're getting paid. I'd love to see what happened to the Sailors afterwards and or the alternate ending, but I'll be riding your awesome stuff no matter what!

I guess I'm a little curious as to what happens to Moon and the other senshi, but the story ended well, and I was surprised that Esmeraude got what was coming to her. Overall, a great story and I'm loving your others as well.