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Hmm, how ironic, yet appropriate. All in all, this is probably among the most disturbing fics I've ever read. Now, how about more of Jadeite's Revenge? That one I'm rather enjoying.

I liked it! Nice ending, great fiction. If you do write a bad end 'alternate,' it would be nice if she mind controlled them somehow. Or just seduced them to make it believable.

I like it, update soon.

I think you've done a great job with this chapter and you've set up the story so wonderfully. I can't wait to see how this has affected Ami and what Makoto will end up doing.

These chapters really are great and I can't wait to read the next installment from Makoto's perspective. Will Ami and Rei approach her about escape? I also hope you do a chapter on Usagi, and whether or not she'll submit to Demando, probably under the guise of an exchange-her submission for their freedom, which won't turn out well (and if she does if Dark Lady will disappear since she probably won't be born anymore). Or maybe a brief little thing on what Mamoru is up to.

I just really like your characterizations, writing style and descriptions, and plot. You've set everything up wonderfully and I hope to read more.

I realize you already have the rest of the story mapped out in your head, and I realize that good storytelling is based on conflict and overcoming adversity (Who would care about Cinderella if her Stepmother wasn't a jerk and her stepsisters didn't torment her?). That being said, as a fan of the series who cares deeply for the characters, please give them a happy ending, please? Since they still exist as guardians in the future I assume you already plan to, but please, let them be triumphant. If nothing else, let Esmeraude get what's coming to her.

Woo, a bukkake chapter! Nice realistic portrayal of the darker side of bukkake.

this is pretty good.

Oh, love this story! Like others have said, it's hard finding decent sailor moon dark fic. Really really eager to see the next chapter, hopefully from the POV of Makoto, as she's kinda been glanced over up until now in terms of what she's really thinking. Im so curious!

that new chapter was a gem. it's cool how each of the senshi has a diffrent reaction to what's going on. Can't wait to see things from Makato's perspective.