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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hi there! Nice start!!!
It seems you are going to handle a very deep plot, congrat for the idea.
I'll keep the reading. So far (1 chapter) it promises a lot!!!
It seems you are going to handle a very deep plot, congrat for the idea.
I'll keep the reading. So far (1 chapter) it promises a lot!!!
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Mmmmmm...i can't belive what idea goes through my mind....it very suspicious they name their oldest son "Youichi"...i mean. If he wanted to make Hiruma feel bad, thats centanly the way but...Youichi has 20 years old...and the other is 10...quite a difference...althrough we don't know the other one age, it's still very weird...and the fact they (Gen and Mamori) didn't just one kiss in their mouths...? Mmmmmmmm...anyway. Second chapter: very intriguer...
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, i actually though Hiruma will kiss Musashi's ass from there to Alaska...but hi didn't...XD
To bad, i wanted some action!!!
JIijiji, next chapter!!!
To bad, i wanted some action!!!
JIijiji, next chapter!!!
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Now i undestand Musashi (sorry, i just can't call him Gen) and Mamori's relationship....they are, more than anything friends, which is good, by the way. And she knew of their realtionship, so i'm starting to think that she actually doesn't love him (Musashi), more like, apreciate him as the father os her son...i' talking bullshit? XD
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, now everything is just to much weird. No matter what, i don't think i'll be so happy to see the man who make me lost a child and used to sleep with my husband...and me...and.... well, you get th point.
It's just creepy, they are all friendly and all...Maybe i'm just a bicht but...hey, i'm human and they don't.
It's just creepy, they are all friendly and all...Maybe i'm just a bicht but...hey, i'm human and they don't.
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like Mamory. In fact i think she likes yaoi, and that's way she is sooo understanding whit her husband affair...jijijiji I'll be...buajajajajajajajaja (devil's laugh)
Anyway...so...Emi is sena and Susuna's daughter? Jiijiji, sena as a father!!! I have to see that!!!
Anyway...so...Emi is sena and Susuna's daughter? Jiijiji, sena as a father!!! I have to see that!!!
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just a short phrase: Ken, the second son...mmmm....i'm suspicious about who he bring to his room....i doubth is a girl.....
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah!!! Kurita with a beard!!! Jajajajaja, he is so cute, but with a beard...mmmm jiijiji
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September 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
All my guessing are wrong but hei!, let see this way...the human kind will keep on reproducing thanks to the very straigh sons of Musashi....jiijijiji
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February 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story has been going on for over a year. I'm pleased at how its progressing. I don't think I ever mentioned how cool it is with the whole Yellowcard theme going on. I sense this story is wrapping up now, and that is always the hardest part. I plan to keep checking back every once in a while. Please keep it up, I will definetly finish this.