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March 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG you updated last night/ today!
And with "Metalia-sama" to boot! I was excited about learning more about Jedite and Zoisite's relationship after leaving the castle. It's nice to see them take things slowly, but also realistically face other problems, such as the rumors flying around and tension among the people about them. Makes it seem a lot more realistic, and certainly a little more unnerving, since I have suspicions that Metalia is stil around...
Also, I like how you write Beryl. She sounds, for the most part, very distant from a regular nature of a human woman, probably because she's a witch, but I like how you made her with this discomforting type of aura, even though she seems to speak with no malice. A question has been nagging at me; does she harbor any feelings for Endymion? I'm very curious.
And with "Metalia-sama" to boot! I was excited about learning more about Jedite and Zoisite's relationship after leaving the castle. It's nice to see them take things slowly, but also realistically face other problems, such as the rumors flying around and tension among the people about them. Makes it seem a lot more realistic, and certainly a little more unnerving, since I have suspicions that Metalia is stil around...
Also, I like how you write Beryl. She sounds, for the most part, very distant from a regular nature of a human woman, probably because she's a witch, but I like how you made her with this discomforting type of aura, even though she seems to speak with no malice. A question has been nagging at me; does she harbor any feelings for Endymion? I'm very curious.
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February 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I loved this story!! I just read all 14 chapters in one sitting. what will happen to Zoisite & Jadeite?? Why is Kunzite so upset by their relationship?? discust? or is it jealousy??? WAH!! Is the demon really contained? Why was the king so quick to accept their resignations?? ANSWER ME!! and hopefully, we'll see some good ol'fashioned lovin between Zoi and Jade in the next few chapters!! GRR!!
There were two words that were used incorrectly and it drove me nuts... First, if I saw you a few months ago, i could say I saw you in the PAST. We walk PASSED the grocery store on the way to work. Secondly, I would never sit next to that VILE piece of filth. But I may drink poison from a small VIAL that i keep in my pocket.
Otherwise, great writing. I look forward to the rest of the story!! You're definitely on my favorites list. :D
There were two words that were used incorrectly and it drove me nuts... First, if I saw you a few months ago, i could say I saw you in the PAST. We walk PASSED the grocery store on the way to work. Secondly, I would never sit next to that VILE piece of filth. But I may drink poison from a small VIAL that i keep in my pocket.
Otherwise, great writing. I look forward to the rest of the story!! You're definitely on my favorites list. :D