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Wow! Wolf is being called 'Shinou' in misunderstanding. COOL!!
Yuuri is an absolute jerk! make him suffer please!
And for Wolf, so many options. Ellis, the silver haired guy, and who else?
Update soon!

I love the way this story is developing, poor Wolf pregnant and on his own. Yuuri is such an idiot, he deserves whatever that Melinda chick does to him for being so stupid. Gave up a great thing just cuz he had a penis. I also enjoy the interactions between Wolf and captain Ellis, some interesting stuff going on there:D

I wonder how Yuuri would react if he knew about the relationships happening around him? What's Melinda planning and when is she gonna get caught? I can't wait for the next installment:D keep up the good work

Thanks for your story, there is too few good Kyou Kara Maoh fanfiction out there.

wow.. i mean, really.. that chapter was brilliant. from grammar to wording to plot, it was really well-written. i love the consistency of your characters, especially yuuri. i mean, i know i must be hating him for hurting wolfram. but what i find great here is that certain consistency in his character, in that he did not suddenly realize he was inlove or that he did not have a sudden epiphany of how male-male relationships were okay. this constant attitude of him rejecting such notion adds to the depth of his character. he may be hate-worthy, but there's no denying he is well-written. i really don't know what to feel towards melinda. at some parts, she seems all nice and innocent (like going out with greta). but i wanted to kick her when she spoke to yuuri about wolfram in such mean manner, as if she was subtly egging yuuri to forget wolfram. i really don't know yet if i should feel sympathy towards her. conrad and gwendal were humorous in this chapter, especially at the dining table. i love the way you incorporated the other airings here, subtle but very effective. i also love gisela as she is one strong character. she knows to stand up for wolfram and she readily defies yuuri for what she believes in. as for wolfram, i miss him already! i really want to know what happened to him. i really hope he's doing okay. anyway, thanks for sharing such a wonderful chapter. hope to read more soon. ;)

Hi. This is very beautiful and sad story. Here I sit and weeping above Wolfram's fate ... please Update faster :)

this is an amazing fic. fast-paced, action-packed and wonderfully worded. i like the way the first chapter was written since it did not try to draw out the context of the story for so long. most fics have a tendency to extend the story several chapters just to set the pace. i love the way you did not do it here but still give a vivid idea of what is happening. the characters are amazingly written. each is fresh and unique in his/her own way. the complexity of each character is especially reflected in the second chapter. very good characterizations. i am awed by the plot and by what wolfram is about to do. i am so excited to read where you're going to with your plot line. this is really good so please please please do not abandon this. a lot of good fics remain unfinished. and although i know you are in no way obliged to finish this, i would really really like to see where it's gonna end. please update. thanks for sharing such an amazing fic. ;)

this is a good mpreg story ^^ write more, I wanna see the adventure!

Oh this is different!

I like the characterisations.

I must say I always thought the same thing about the 'engagement' and I am glad you pointed it out so well!

The chapters are long and I am excited in anticipation of the next chapter!

It seem that Yuuri does care for Wolfram but he just need to realise ths....and maybe flashback to his night with sexy Wolfe!! ^___^

So rare to find good mpreg Kyou Kara Maou fic, and yours is one of the few. ^^ . I love this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

-Gwyn

I like it, it's a very strong start and I hope to more of it soon.

i want more this is a great start cant wait to see where this goes