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for The Heat of the Moment

by KIKI441

person Raelyn
schedule November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Sniffle. Wow, that was heart-wrenching. Yuuri constantly makes me want to slap him he is so dense. I love how much depth you're giving to Yuu, it's nice to see.

Good chapter and I'm looking forward to the next.
person jreel08
schedule November 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg. You've got me on the edge of my seat here. Not tot sound rude but, HURRY UP WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER. pretty please. I am addicted.

add me to your mailing list for this story if you have one:

jreel08@yahoo.com
person Ana-nee
schedule November 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg!!!this story is sooo freakin good! i cant wait for the next chapter ^^ -huggles- you are an awesome writer, i love your style and you give just enough details, something i need to work on ><
schedule November 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please email me when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person Polka dot
schedule November 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad this got updated, though I really don't like Greta.
person eternal
schedule October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter as usual :D way to go greta!!! :D
though this greta is much much more mature than i imagine she could ever be :p
the good part of this chapter is that actually the reason why yuu acts like he does caused by scare of denial from yuuri :D that's really nice
hope to see more soon ^^
person SP777
schedule October 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
about #23...

O-o-o... o_O

The plot thickens. I was wondering how long it would take before Yuu snapped and
told somebody off...and to think I thought the child was seeing a LITTLE bit of
sense.

Such an angry child who wants to hang onto hate and NOT even try to see reason, now
that's something I didn't think would come from a child of Yuuri & Wolfram, but..of
course with the BAD influences around him, he can't help BUT hold onto such strong
emotions.
person Polka dot
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wolfram needs to come and take back his son, cause I really like Yuu and don't want him to become a villian.
person yatte!
schedule October 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Returned to the world of internet and 3 chapters had been updated! Read them all- so very good- I'm excited to see what happens... I hope Yuu realizes the true love between his parents before doing something that would hurt everyone... (please don't kill anybody, I would die, too!!!) XD do your best to update soon, please! Thank you so much for updating! <3
person cocoke5
schedule October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very good story and can not wait for the next chapter and see what will happen next and will wolfam get there in time. or will the son do what he is to do. can not wait for the next chapter and see you are doing a get job on the story . up date soon

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