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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Muraken makes an appearance!!! Geez, I wonder what Yuu would think if he knew that Greta's parents were killed. Foot, meet mouth XD
Anyway, I am eagerly looking forward to reading about Yuu meeting Yuuri's mother!!! HAHAHAA~~~ How could you not love her!?
Anyway, I am eagerly looking forward to reading about Yuu meeting Yuuri's mother!!! HAHAHAA~~~ How could you not love her!?
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
yay another chappy ^^ but so sadish cause i want more lol. showing support for anothing KKM writer and just letting you know i adore your fic and can't wait untill you update ^_^
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September 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg i'm sooo loving this story ^_^ it sucks that Yuu is trying to destroy Yuuri but hopefully Yuuri can win him over and i'm happy too see that it's kinda working ^_^ I bet he didn't tell Wolfram he was their either. i hope Yuuri get's a clue and sends him a note anywya....or at least someone does. -_____- oh dear and i can just imagine what he'd think when he find the two of them are getting married. well sending out support to another KKM writter and i hope you update soon ^_^
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September 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! I'm a new fan of your story xDD
I really like the new chapter, seeing that Yuu is warming up to his father,
but he's still bore hatred for his dad ;-;
I hope it turns out happy in the end!
Update soon ~
I really like the new chapter, seeing that Yuu is warming up to his father,
but he's still bore hatred for his dad ;-;
I hope it turns out happy in the end!
Update soon ~
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September 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am not so much a fan of this pairing, but I'm happy to see more of your writing. It's a very interesting story.
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September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OHMYGOD! you finally updated! glad to see you haven't abandoned this.. hurray you!
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dun dun dun!!! and the plot thickens! well i do hope yuu stops being stubborn and see that he's being used
update more pls!
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dun dun dun!!! and the plot thickens! well i do hope yuu stops being stubborn and see that he's being used
update more pls!
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September 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, to be honest, I passed this story up so many times I can't even count (mostly because Mpreg isn't my thing). But after the 20th time I checked the KKM page to see if my other stories had updated and this one was at the top yet again, I said "Hey, why not? I'm kinda bored."
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HOLY ****!!! THIS STORY IS ****ING AWESOME!!!!!! This is, by far, the best Mpreg ever! The emotions you've got running through this story are just *real*. Aside from little ooc moments (which, I believe are unavoidable in fanfiction since whatever you're writing is something that doesn't happen in the story), everyone stays wonderfully in character, but with a dark, not-so-happy-go-lucky edge that sets up this totally engrossing tone to your story. Seriously. I read all 21 chapters in two sittings.
As for your new character Yuu, his anger towards Yuuri and his outlashes at everyone could have easily gone over to the "Oh geez, shut that kid up! Brat!"-side of things, but you've written it in a way where I was going "Yeah, I can totally see this happening." and you can see how he could be so confused/jealous/scared whatever about Yuuri and his Father. Especially since he thought Ellis was his father for such a long time! On the other hand, I do think Wolfram's children are borderline Mary Sues (Not only is Dominique a witch, but she's extremely intelligent, mature AND she can speak to animals and has a huge panther following her around), but you find a way to make it work for your story and not be off-putting.
Other than that, the only other disagreeable part of your story is just a peeve of mine. GwendalxGunter XD As much as I love yaoi and like to see it everywhere, even where it doesn't exist, I don't think Gwendal and Gunter will ever be a couple. Good friends, yeah. Couple, no. I don't think Gunter is romantically interested in Gwendal and despite Gwendal's penchant for knitting and cute things, I honestly think the guy's straight. But don't let that discourage you, that's just my theory of things!!
ANYWAY, waiting for the next chapter!! Reading about Yuu pretending to sorta warm up to Yuuri is gonna be EXCELLENT!! Muahahahaaaa!!
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HOLY ****!!! THIS STORY IS ****ING AWESOME!!!!!! This is, by far, the best Mpreg ever! The emotions you've got running through this story are just *real*. Aside from little ooc moments (which, I believe are unavoidable in fanfiction since whatever you're writing is something that doesn't happen in the story), everyone stays wonderfully in character, but with a dark, not-so-happy-go-lucky edge that sets up this totally engrossing tone to your story. Seriously. I read all 21 chapters in two sittings.
As for your new character Yuu, his anger towards Yuuri and his outlashes at everyone could have easily gone over to the "Oh geez, shut that kid up! Brat!"-side of things, but you've written it in a way where I was going "Yeah, I can totally see this happening." and you can see how he could be so confused/jealous/scared whatever about Yuuri and his Father. Especially since he thought Ellis was his father for such a long time! On the other hand, I do think Wolfram's children are borderline Mary Sues (Not only is Dominique a witch, but she's extremely intelligent, mature AND she can speak to animals and has a huge panther following her around), but you find a way to make it work for your story and not be off-putting.
Other than that, the only other disagreeable part of your story is just a peeve of mine. GwendalxGunter XD As much as I love yaoi and like to see it everywhere, even where it doesn't exist, I don't think Gwendal and Gunter will ever be a couple. Good friends, yeah. Couple, no. I don't think Gunter is romantically interested in Gwendal and despite Gwendal's penchant for knitting and cute things, I honestly think the guy's straight. But don't let that discourage you, that's just my theory of things!!
ANYWAY, waiting for the next chapter!! Reading about Yuu pretending to sorta warm up to Yuuri is gonna be EXCELLENT!! Muahahahaaaa!!
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September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
A Friendly Reminder
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.
Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!
Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^
Just thought I'd leave you a note to let you know your disclaimer is lacking. According to the Terms of Service you need to include that you are in fact making no money from writing this story, and that you do not own the people involved. Also it helps if you specify the fandom you are writing about.
Even though this story is about fictional characters, it needs to be known that they are not yours and you’re not making any money. You know a ’cover your butt’ thing.
Also if you have included one of these things it’s not enough. You have to have a full disclaimer. This is not only to protect us but to protect you!
Feel free to remove this once the problem is corrected. Thanks ^_^
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September 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAAA hooray you update. This is getting good, but why Do i get the feeling that these three months will be far more chaotic? Anyways, great story you have going for your self here.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah crap- I thought there were only 20 chapters and that it'd be wrapped up, but it's still ongoing?! Please continue! It can end this way! This is the most developed, plot-filled YuuWolf WolfYuu fic I've ever read and I CRAVE more! I stayed up a whole night just getting to chapter 10 the first time! Please continue!!!