rate_review Reviews

about #3-13...

Man, this story has more drama than a soap opera.

*sigh* As much as I like Yuuri, it IS all his fault. Even though, you COULD excuse
him for his belief as a teenager [..children can't help what they believe or feel,
as they grow in a close-mided society..], as Yuu said, in a nutshell, he was
responsible for a kingdom, he should have been open to the beliefs of THAT
world.

Now, look at where Yuuri is at, he has some serious butt-kissing to do.

By the way, I loved the relationship you developed between Wolfram & Ellis, it was
tender & sweet. I loved how level-minded Ellis was and how he understood Wolfram's
feelings. You don't get characters like that much in fanfiction.

Lastly, I liked how you handled Greta, unlike SOME authors who refuse to put a
character in a story, even though they are IN THE ANIME, at least, you downplayed
her character enough so she wouldn't be an annoyance and take away from the plot...
and hopefully, some folks are satisfied.

This is very well written.
I do think the Yuri has suffered enough
i am not saying that Wolf should through himself at him either.
Wolf it to blame for not telling him about his father
IT is wrong to poison the mind of a child against their parents.

this is a good and sad story.

your story got me hooked! and that's saying something, i'm picky with fanfictions and whatnot xD

go you! <3

nice chapter as i hoped XD
but noooooo.... why ellis have to die? and i already loved that character already =.=
though kind of jumped from chapter 10... but it is good because of Yuuri is going to meet Wolfram again...
hehe kind of curious about how Yuuri going to make Yuu likes him XD
though i can understand Yuu's feeling towards Yuuri as he never received father's love from him.
but still... Why does Ellis have to die T.T
but i Still Love this story and hope to see update soon ^^

Excellent work! Every day i'm eagerly waiting for more chapters and you sure deliver the goods! I have no idea how you manage to write so fast, amazing. :)
And you sure made Yuuri look bad in this story though, heh. That's why personally I dont think Yuuri deserves to get Wolfram back. If only he could get back his soul and heart from that wretched man. (though, you probably have plans with getting them back together... i just feel so sorry for Wolfram. :) )

You're so fast !! And it's so good too. Please keep this speed ^^ Thank you very much !!

WUAAAHHH!!!! nice chapters... wait GREAT chapters XD
wow! wolfram having a baby of Ellis!!! that's sweet :)
and now enter new characters that want wolfram too!!! though for no good intention but think its a great one!!
Go uke wolfram XD wish to see more chapters soon!!!
your story is great and i agree that your plot are excellent too
now you are making me impatient for new chapters XD hope they're be soon
thanks for your story

You write it so gooooodddd I'm gonna make it my favorite . Please, update soon.XD I can't wait to read ...

gah!! the weddings did take place! i'm quite surprised really. now i know i hate melinda, and i was right about my initial opinion of her. finally yuuri had enough sense to divorce her. i really liked how you played out chapter 6. it reflected so much on the things that have changed in blood pledge castle and the people in it. i laughed out loud with the starting scene of conrad waddling. i can believe gwendal had a lot to do with the accident at their wedding. the way you wrote bitchy melinda was amusing yet credible. the fact that she did not cuddle to yuuri after yuuri confronted her added to the credibility of her character, even if she is a mean one. i'm glad she's finally out of the story. as for wolfram, i don't know if i should be happy for him. sure, i'm happy that he's okay and safe and happy with his little boy (i love yuu's name - it goes to show how wolfram has somewhat gotten over his bitterness to yuuri and also that he does not feel vengeful enough to deny yuu of his other father). however, ellis poses another problem. he's such a dream man - so nice, loving and understanding. how in the world is yuuri supposed to compete with him? who was there for wolfram all through his pregnancy and even accepted yuu? this character makes the plot more problematic and give the couple (wolfram and yuuri) another conflict to grapple with. moving on. i so love gisela, her rant made her such a courageous woman to stand up against the king and such a loyal friend to wolfram all these years. the consistency of her character is really amazing, she never loses it. i wonder what wolfram wrote though..is he coming back or is yuuri going after him? both chapters were high on emotion without forgetting the plot. the time elapsed gave the story time pace itself so it was great. loved them. love your fic. ;)

That was very touching ... oh my god. I read your story on FFNet but I found the update here ^^" weird ...
Anyway, I was very happy reading this chapter. Made me laugh and cry at the same time haha
Please update soon