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June 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It was good. Guess it's no chance you'll continue this.
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December 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Good fic. Hope thers more coming
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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very good serie, I like how it went. Congrats!
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September 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You updated it! Yah!!!!
I liked it a lot!
I liked it a lot!
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July 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I like this fic. Can Haruka be next?
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Pretty short, but it has potential.
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May 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm glad your back
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April 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I would like a addition to this.
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August 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You disturbed me on so many levels with this pwp I don't know where to begin.
1. use a spell checker.
2. if the cum was burning hot she would have burns on her face and throat and vagina.
3. when used in a story and referencing two objects the word two should be used, not the number, it looks BAD and breaks your story's flow.
4. pregnancy takes more than one night to show. Go read a book about it, google it or something if you don't believe me.
1. use a spell checker.
2. if the cum was burning hot she would have burns on her face and throat and vagina.
3. when used in a story and referencing two objects the word two should be used, not the number, it looks BAD and breaks your story's flow.
4. pregnancy takes more than one night to show. Go read a book about it, google it or something if you don't believe me.
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May 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed it....
I would like to see a few more chapters.
Though it could use more detail and a actual plot if you were to continue the story.
I would like to see a few more chapters.
Though it could use more detail and a actual plot if you were to continue the story.