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May 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i would really like to see yue fucking sakura in the park aganst a tree, with her tied up by vines. and the nly thing i didnt like about the pedo chapter was it being rape, not all pedos need to be rape, it would have been awesome if it had been sakuras father fucking her, maybe do a chapter on incest? Also, since clow reed chose her as the next mistress, perhaps have him come to her in a dream and fuck in the wet dream card? or eriol for a shower sex card, where he snecks intothe school showers to screw her
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March 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I have to say this is a good story but you went a little to fast. There is no need to rush a story. Take your time. If you were to write this more in detail I would give it 5/5. But for now my rate will have to be 3/5.
Good job though. ^^
Good job though. ^^
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June 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was so hot. MORE!
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June 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
F#&!ing awesome as everything you write about sakura and company, especially sakura and touya. ;)
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hi, do you think you could do another sequel to both Sailor Moon (Usagi) and CCS (Sakura) character with one of your tentacles..? lol, fnd it a bit too amusing to read besides, its kinky in a good way :D
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July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice...can't wait for more
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June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
WTFO_o!? Tha was so weird but cool!
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May 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The idea has been done...apparently twice if I am reading another author's review correctly? I'm going to have to check that out.
I don't think you are doing yourself any favors by using a first person point of view, it makes everything seem weird and choppy. Furthermore, substituting in numerals where you could have just typed out the word (two -> 2) looks very poor.
All in all...well, I obviously think you have a good concept here, since my one story is a similar idea, but you need more work to make it good.
I don't think you are doing yourself any favors by using a first person point of view, it makes everything seem weird and choppy. Furthermore, substituting in numerals where you could have just typed out the word (two -> 2) looks very poor.
All in all...well, I obviously think you have a good concept here, since my one story is a similar idea, but you need more work to make it good.
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May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant update! A very sexy Syaoranxyoung girl in a wet t-shirt lemon!
I'm glad you decided to add more to this. I especially like how you're going to alternate between Sak and Syao, so they both can get naughty with the cards.
I'm glad you decided to add more to this. I especially like how you're going to alternate between Sak and Syao, so they both can get naughty with the cards.
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May 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Idea was already done. By... me. Quite a while back in 06.