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Wow!!! I wish a have someone like Toma, how efficient!!! Of course, first of all i need a Rike or a Iason...T-T....my life sucks!!!

Poor Raimen. Remember or well, hear all that from Jupiter, quite a shock.
Raimen...it sounds like Ramen...jijijiji...delicious! Go for it Kai!!! (well...when he wake up)

I agree with Jake calling Bastian 'Lord Bastard'. He and Gerard are absolute assholes. I am guessing that Jupiter had Argent and Omaki work together on the ball to help them awaken. And the mischievous Omaki strikes again, although this time unwittingly. LOL!! The image of Iason tapping his foot in frustrated anger is hilarious. Now to more pressing matters. When will Raoul awaken? Is Yui perhaps Raouls ancient lover or an 'anomaly' of some sort? What was Raouls father like (I can guess the 'relationship' he had with Kai and Raimon)? Oh I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! Its so much fun to read and your descriptions or people and events are amazing! Its easy to picture how the scenes look and the sequence of actions. Every chapter has me completely enthralled. I give you cookies and brownies as a thanks!!

Update soon please!!

Ganbatte!!

Ryn

OMG!! Omi after everything he had been through wants to go back to the sea of darkness...God Omaki what are we going to do with you.*giggles* It was nice that they woke together, seeing as they did die together. But Iason will have Omaki's head before the night is through, while Kai, Raimen and Riki will just sit back and watch with laughter in their eyes. Can't wait to see the Gala continue on though the night, seeing as how the food was the source of the real entertainment, instead of the punch this time.*grins* Raoul should wake soon enough, when you think to the fact that Riki picked up on his awakening, it's only a matter of time.

All I have to say about Lord Bastard is that I hope he dies a very painfull death after what he is putting Martin and Jake through. Speaking of Martin I wanted to cry knowing how close he was to dying. Martin, Jake hold on just alittle longer, Iason will come and save you two once he knows that it is indeed you who are in need of saving.

I know I haven't reviewed very often, but I love what you have done with these people. The game is now on, Iason and Riki with their parents are gonna kick ass, aren't they...

Please keep up the good work.

BLOODY HELL I AM BEYOND PISSED!!!! I made a long review for this chapter and what happens it did not show up, and I'll be damned if I am typing it all again so... I am just going to say this that once again you have out done yourself and I can't wait for the next chapter.*walks off sulking*

Wow, that was just wow...though just to let you know I did find a few mistakes but...WOW!!!!!!!!!!! I am really glad to hear that Darius is going to try to save Martin and the other medic, I hope that sometime soon he tells Iason what he found out, Iason I think will be able to help find them faster. I am also glad that Raoul has some info. on his father, it was nice of Sir Earl to hand it to him now he just needs to view it...and maybe see Kai and Raimen too. Little by little everyday Omaki is remembering his past from the dance to the poems and now the minds eye with them at the beach with him seeing a young man running and laughing in the waves at the shore, or him walking in the desert alone. I think just one more push and he'll remember everything...and I think that push will be at the Gala when Kai and Raimen get their hands on him. Once again you did a another beautiful chappie, and I can't wait for what awaits us at the Gala....so until then BYE LOVE!!!*chu*

I love your story very much, and I've been reading the previous one, which is Aristian Holiday. I can't help but noticed that some of the characters were taken from Kira Takenouchi's Taming Riki, isnt' it? I just wondering if you're planning on writting about Yousi as well, is he turned out to be one of the ancients? And if he is, why Jupiter tampered his mind? What secrets did he find? Actually I pretty much like this Yousi character. Keep up the good work and take care

Ack...I'm sorry,I'm sorry,I'm sorry I'm just now getting to this but Here it is short but sweet. The only the I have to say about Martin is IASON PLEASE HELP HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*cries* The confrence was very informative. Kai lost his temper a lot but it was to be expected, it was funny when they learned of Omi. Can't wait for when they see him in person. Poor Raoul I hope he did get that drink that he so wanted.*smiles* And it would seem that Omi is starting to remember when he was dancing, getting a litle closer now we just need him to fully awaken so he can tell them where the madiens are.

So to put it bluntly Omaki holds the key to something huge, and until Lady Yuri awakens and Omi gets his full memory back he can not give back this ring that holds some importance. Right??? And Omi is remembering since he had that flash of Lady Yuri as an old women. I wonder what she has planed once she and Omaki meet again????