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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You have just killed me, how could you cut Iason and Riki off.*cries, then dies**giggles* No but seriously that was a really good chappie. Kai and Raimen are so proud of their boys, and who wouldn't be those two went through hell and back and managed to find each other again and stay together. They battled any and all who posed a threat to them and the one they love.

Kai and Raimen was so happy to see Raoul, it really sucks that Raoul has no memory that would have been something to see. Poor Raoul, he's so confused and yet excited because he has learned though not in detail that he too is an Ancient as well as all the Blondies. Plus that he has a father he never knew he had(father has fist name to my middle, though his is Rene while mine is Renee), since they were all born out of tubes and whatnot. You know thinking about the Gala, I really can't wait for Kai and Raimen to see Omaki. Wonder if he was as he is now!?!?!?*grins*

Toma and Ayuda what can one say to that except glad Toma was restored like Daryl and Katze and WOW THAT WAS HOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!*blushes*

Iason and Riki you cut them off!!!!!!!!*cries again* I hope this picks up with round two in the next chappie.*gives puppy dog eyes* Well until next time bye love!!!

Omaki and Argent in bed- Wow *cough* I *cough* I mean Argent is really a poet that he is. Whispering sweet nothings to the not so sleeping Omi. Omi thinking that the words that was said to him in their throws of pasion and after, was nothing but a beautiful dream. Ah, but Argent proved him wrong, just to have Omi prove that their night together was going to be way more than a one nightstand. He did that with his own words and the sweet lovemaking afterwords. (could one call it sweet lovemaking OR hot very HOT sex????)^_^ Got to love how Omi can really get into something, just one wiff of 'The Lords Dance' and it had him up and about pacing naked while trying to get all the info. on this sent so he could base the gala around it. And Argent is really smart as he came up with the plan on how to get the pets that has the holo-pic together,having them work on the preparations for the Gala.

Jupiter summoning the two Lords- Jeez, at first even I thought that somehow she found out about the holo-pic that is making it's rounds thanks to that blasted pet Enyu, but thank goodness that she is clueless. All she wanted to do was help with the plans of the bash now turned Gala. Poor Omaki all of a sudden he isn't in control of his own party anymore. He can't do half the things he wanted to do like the 'Welcome back old farts' banner or the spiked punch.(Now I myself would love to have a repeat of the events that follow the drinking of the punch) And what is it that Argent knows about Omaki it must have something to do with the Ancients, obviously. And what is up with Jupiter calling Omaki 'my jewel' now that gets one thinking. It's clear that Omaki plays an even bigger part in this whole Ancient thing then even he realizes. That's how I see it, and it's made clear that he holds importances as this was said, and I quote:"But Jupiter had more in store for Omaki, her "jewel" was indeed as beautiful as his heart, Omaki's playfulness was one thing, Jupiter could never find the will to entirely erase from his character, although she did not always approve of is activities or sexual appetite. But she found that in the many Blondie's she brought back from extinction, that certain characteristics would survive the birthing on each one, and not all could be completely removed just lay dormant for some future event she would not be able to undo. Omaki is as she remembered him, as she remembered all her children." end quote. So is he as big as Iason and Riki and just don't remember it yet??? I am leaning towards that. And you just about gave me a heart-attack when Omi was questioning Argent's trust, how could he think me*cough*I mean him as a spy!!!!*cries* Their love was almost ruined because of that, but thank god Omaki knows that what Jensen said to him on the way back to the Taming Tower can be trusted as truth.*breaths a sigh of relief*

Iason, Riki, Jupiter, Raimen, Ian and that asshole Eric- what can one say about that, except that, that bastard got what was coming to him. If it were up to me I would have made him suffer a lot more. I'm happy that Iason and Riki was able to get their revenge on him by showing that ass the last moments of what was left of his clan. It also gave Kai closer, to see that. But the one thing I didn't agree with was letting him go to jump in the pit himself. I would have killed him then tossed his sorry ass in, but they let him go and he did the typical(which I knew he was going to do)grab Iason and pull him down with him. Thank the GODS Iason can float, and he didn't have the satisfaction of pulling Iason and Riki apart again. Shit I was laughing my butt off when both Riki and Raimen made Iason blush with their little SEX jokes. Poor Ian at first it made me sad to think that he couldn't be reanimated, but I'm glad that Iason remembered that they had DNA there in the lab and that it was still intact. Now they can all be back together again as it should be.*smiles*

Can't wait for the next chappy, until then BYE LOVE!!!!!!*smiles*

Hi, I was wondering if Iason and Riki find out want Enyu did? That will be fun to read about.

Now MJ2001-it would not be fair if I told you EVERYTHING now would it? Hmmm....nope...you'll have to wait *grins*

OH THAT CHAPTER WAS GREAT AND I LOVE IT AND I LOVE THE STORY TOO I HAVE READ THE FIRST ONE AND FELL IN LOVE WITH IT AND NOW I FELL IN LOVE WITH THIS STORY TO AND CAN WAIT FOR MORE . YOU HAVE DONE GREAT WITH THIS STORY AND CAN NOT WIAT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER OF THE STORY AND SEE WHAT HAPPEN TO ENUY AND LORD STEEL . WILL OMIK SELL ENUY TO LORD STEEL. UNIT NEXT YOU UP DATE.

Thanx for the really nice review Coco! Glad you are enjoying my story *grins* Sorry to make my muse blush Jenn...*or AM I?* Hope to have Chapter 10 out faster than this one! Thanx!!

Oh you suck!!!! Here I was going to do this really long review, but after reading THAT!!!!! THAT SCENE WITH OMAKI AND *cough*ME*cough*JENSEN I have lost ALL train of thought and just died and gone to heaven.*drools* OK next chapter I have to makeup for my lack of words and do a REALLY BIG REVIEW!!!! *smiles* Until then BYE LOVE!!!!

This is a great story with a unique plot. I hope you will keep going with it as it gives a nice change from the origional. I like what you are doing with Iason's and Riki's fathers and look forward to their reaction to Omaki.

I also like what is happening with the other characters. Please keep going as I'm looking forward to where you are leading everyone with enthusiasm.

*bows to Untamedlady* You are *blushes while I let you fill in the blank*. I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! You truly make my day everytime I read you updates.

Okay now that you updated I will not discipline you *mumbles under breath because I wont be able to test out new paddle* This was a chapter WORTH waiting for.*smiles*

Okay enough teasing on with the review.

Kai's waking- So cool to have the Warrior Lord able to wake to a beautiful morning and to have an even more beautiful man sleeping at his side. To have Raimen there when he woke made it just sink in even more that what happened the night before was real and not a *nightmare* in his case.

Raimen and kai's talk after Raimen wakes up- The talk that they have about the soon reanimation of their wives was a touching subject indeed. Hoping that Lady Erin’s return would cause her to suffer as she remembers the fateful plunge she took to her death. Or Lady Yuri having to go through the same as Kai for she too lived for such a long time and had to go though that life without her love, her husband by her side when their whole world fell to ruins. Thinking about how Lady Yuri spent many centuries of mourning her husband. How in the end, her broken heart was too much to bear, and one day she just didn’t wake up. That kind of thing will really mess with her head when she is brought back and see's that the very man she mourned was in fact alive. Man, it will suck reading that because it will affect not only her but Raimen and Iason as well.

It is really nice that they take pride in how their sons turned out. How Riki to quote Raimen '"has merged with his other persona in such an excellent way, with his powers of deduction, and empathic abilities"' And Iason turned out to be quite an Heir to Raimen. How Iason had created Jupiter and the entries or anomalies that Iason stored in her helped bring about their awakening. Those are two sons worth to be proud over.

AND HERE IT COMES THE MOMENT THAT I AS WELL AS RAIMEN AND KAI HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR*drumrolls please*THEIR FIRST INTIMATE ENCOUNTER SINCE THEIR DEATHS- *blushes thorugh whole thing* that was really sexy and sweet to read. How Raimen transformed for Kai and focused on his lover, and with his inner power, began to lift Kai’s hips gently helping Kai since for now he still could not get his body to do what he wanted. How quote on quote 'Raimen’s beautiful transformation gave the appearance of Kai being loved by an angel.' I can so see Raimen as just that.

Iason and Riki- I feel jealous and sorry for them cause they got quite a show even though they didn't want it. But hey their father's love each other, so you really can't blame them now can you.

I liked the fact that it was Iason that suggested they, how he put it "invade Omaki’s mind and entertain him, give him the most erotically charged wet dream he could ever imagine" I would have thought that Riki would suggest that.*giggles* But once again they got quite a show, when they saw Omaki with a young *cough* Blondie *cough* and his pet.*smiles, and you know why*

But this whole thing right here was an eye opener:(go past this, just quoting a scene)'But as they focused in on what was being said, Iason and Riki grew serious. Omaki was furious and this was not atypical of the mischievous and light-hearted Blondie, no, this was indeed not Omaki at his best.

The two invading Lords now hovered above the scene and could not believe the nature of the threesome. Riki and Iason listened intently as the young Pet blurted out Enyu’s horrible plot involving Omaki’s planned “big bash,” and how he had given Iason’s holopic to many Pet’s from various households, and Lord Argent Jensen’s Pet had been caught masturbating with the image of Iason naked wearing only a bell.

Iason gave Riki a playful spank on the ass as this holopic was both Omaki and Riki’s doing. Riki shook his head in disbelief as his anger began to rise at the incredible lengths Enyu had taken in order to sabotage Omaki’s party.

“Damn Cat Boy! I ought to fuck him up for what he did! And to Omaki of all people!” Riki’s hair began to float serenely as his anger prompted his transformation which in turn kicked up his tempest. Riki was so angered by what he heard he had half the mind to send Enyu flying out the window wherever he was in the building. Riki’s anger was evident as several candles in Omaki’s personal suite were blown out. Something Omaki noticed, but did not pay any mind to, as he had more important issues to deal with.

“Riki stop!” Iason was equally upset by Enyu’s betrayal, that he also wanted to exact justice as the repercussions over that holopic could damage his image, and that of Riki’s. “What ever Omaki does, he should be left to do on his own, as this is his affair. If he needs assistance, he will ask, otherwise, he will have known we were witness to this unfolding drama, and cause Omaki added complications. So calm down my love, let’s leave this session for a more appropriate time, as you can see, he is having his own encounter as we speak.”'(end of scene)

That was intense, Riki and Iason are so pissed and they have every right to be. Enyu not only betrayed Omaki but them as well. That is unforgivable on SO many levels.

Enyu's punishment- All I have to say about that is he got off way to easy. Lord Steele should have done more, at least he got some pain out of it before he got pleasured *pouts* He shouldn't of even had that. Damn Steele and his sex drive, and the fact that he fell for the little fucking pet. *pouts even more* But hey, there's hope that maybe he can buy Enyu off of Omi. *crosses fingers, in hopes that Omi sells the little cat boy*

End of chapter- WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT AS A CLIFFHANGER!?!?! *gives Untamedlady evil eye* maybe I should take my paddle to you. *smiles* Love the chap. and the story can't wait for chapter 9, until then BYE LOVE!!!!!