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June 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just thought to say it's really nice to read a fic in which Iason and Riki are pure lovers, without the constant beating&punishing sessions. A thing or two in your text irritates, but all in all I like your way of writing the charachters and a new chapter just makes my day. *beams*
And yeah, Enyu got off a bit too easily. But I love Omaki&Enyu pairing, so I guess I just hope you'll let Enyu stay...
Anyways, thanks for the story, as well as the previous.
And yeah, Enyu got off a bit too easily. But I love Omaki&Enyu pairing, so I guess I just hope you'll let Enyu stay...
Anyways, thanks for the story, as well as the previous.
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June 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*BLUSHES*I am at a loss of words. ME AT A LOSS, WHO WOULD OF THUNK IT!!!!!!!!!! What can one say then OH FUCK THAT WAS HOT!!!!!!!!!!! Enyu I was smiling from ear to ear when Omi took him to Lord Steel to be punished. But I feel sorry for Omaki as he learned of Enyu's ultimate betrayal. HOW COULD HE DO SUCH A THING!!!!!!!! He claims to have respect for Iason, but can still do something so cruel. And, what about his master did he not think that it could be damaging for Omaki. THAT WHY I HATE THE LITTLE BASTARD, AND I AM HAPPY THAT HE IS GETTING WHAT HE DESERVES. ^__^ Oh and thank you for writing this chap. for me.*blushes*
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOD I LOVE YOU!!!!! That was a very emotional chapter but it turned out great in the end Kai is awake and in Raimen's arms once again.
First meeting- Man the phrase 'love at first sight' belongs to them. To just look at each other and know that they would be soulmates to be lovers for all eternity that is something. Oh and the dance, it made Kai seem the one to be younger since he blushed so much. But hey so would I, if I saw the most beautiful person in the world. And, they wanted to be in my company and no one else's.
First Love sesson- WOW, that was HOT!!!!*drools*I think I need a shower and I just took one two hours ago. That whole thing reminded me of Iason and Riki's first time.
Iason's growing lust and frustrations- That was funny poor Iason getting aroused just by having Riki so close to him. And then trying to get rid of it by thinking about something dull, and boring and unexciting. But instead thought about kissing his neck, or caressing his hip, or grinding against his beatuiful ass that was begging to be fucked. That train of thought made him say this '"BLAST THIS BODY OF MINE!"'*priceless that was absolutly priceless* But hey Riki woke up and gave Iason his release in their mind's eye.
Kai' awakening- Granted it interupted Iason and Riki's sex but it's not like he could have said hey I'll wait... right???? NO!!!! So he woke up with Raimen next to him which in turn made him go a little nuts. BUT IT WAS UNDERSTANDABLE!!!!!! GIVING WHAT HE WENT THOUGH. Riki and Iason came in to Kai in Raimen' arms. Raimen tying to sooth him but it just wasn't reaching him. 'Cuz he tosses him across the room then screams '"YOU'RE DEAD, YOU ARE ALL DEAD! WHY HAS THIS HAPPENED, WHERE AM I? "' They all knew that it would be harder for him to understand then it did for Raimen. But it still hurt to see him like that. Not to mention how hard it was for all three of them to get Kai under control and to see that it was not a dream or hell, but that they were indeed all alive and well, and that all he needed to do was just open his eyes and face reality. It took some time but thanks to Raimen and his threats '"Get your sorry ass out here Kai! If you burn down this building, I will presonally kick you around Eos and make you clean up the whole damn mess!!"' He always seems to be the one to reach him and make him go BAKA because once again the only thing Kai could do is look dumbfounded and think '"Once again this ghost is tossing threats at me"' Ok in the last review I called him clueless so can you tell me what he is now???? *yup, you guessed it STILL CLUELESS**laughs* But I, Raimen and Riki still love him.
Kai opens his eyes- YAY!!! he sees everyone Riki,Iason and....RAIMEN! Riki cries as do I. I cried when they were still tying to wake him. And Raimen well his pissed. Because once again CLUELESS KAI*that's what I named him* asks a very dumb question...WHY?!! Why was Raimen alive and not dead. So Raimen responds to that dumdass question with this. '"Why?!! You find your long lost lover, whom you just tossed across the room and was about to kick your ass where you stand, and all you have to say is WHY?!!"' Kai...Kai...CLUELESS KAI Raimen should have kicked your ass for asking that stupid thing, instead of just pulling him in your arms and kissing him like there was no tomorrow. That is what I would have done first then asked WHY. But that's just me. At least he made you beg for any kind of action '"But if you give me a smile and say 'RAIMEN IS ALIVE, HE IS NOT DEAD AS A DOORNOB NOR IS HE PUSHING UP DAISIES,' then MAYBE I'll kiss you."' And, you redeemed yourself by saying it and got your kiss. *but where's my kiss...I said it too**whines like little neglected baby* OH WELL, maybe next time*wink*
Kai' memories- he really must be headstrong and willful for him to have all his memories even after the mind blocks were put in place. But like he said '"it is more than the mental ability, it takes a strong will, endurance of 500 years of unadulterated psychic attacks, and the drive to survive. It also takes a great deal of love."' You have to respect that, in him.
Okay end of review, untill next chapter BYE LOVE!!!!!
First meeting- Man the phrase 'love at first sight' belongs to them. To just look at each other and know that they would be soulmates to be lovers for all eternity that is something. Oh and the dance, it made Kai seem the one to be younger since he blushed so much. But hey so would I, if I saw the most beautiful person in the world. And, they wanted to be in my company and no one else's.
First Love sesson- WOW, that was HOT!!!!*drools*I think I need a shower and I just took one two hours ago. That whole thing reminded me of Iason and Riki's first time.
Iason's growing lust and frustrations- That was funny poor Iason getting aroused just by having Riki so close to him. And then trying to get rid of it by thinking about something dull, and boring and unexciting. But instead thought about kissing his neck, or caressing his hip, or grinding against his beatuiful ass that was begging to be fucked. That train of thought made him say this '"BLAST THIS BODY OF MINE!"'*priceless that was absolutly priceless* But hey Riki woke up and gave Iason his release in their mind's eye.
Kai' awakening- Granted it interupted Iason and Riki's sex but it's not like he could have said hey I'll wait... right???? NO!!!! So he woke up with Raimen next to him which in turn made him go a little nuts. BUT IT WAS UNDERSTANDABLE!!!!!! GIVING WHAT HE WENT THOUGH. Riki and Iason came in to Kai in Raimen' arms. Raimen tying to sooth him but it just wasn't reaching him. 'Cuz he tosses him across the room then screams '"YOU'RE DEAD, YOU ARE ALL DEAD! WHY HAS THIS HAPPENED, WHERE AM I? "' They all knew that it would be harder for him to understand then it did for Raimen. But it still hurt to see him like that. Not to mention how hard it was for all three of them to get Kai under control and to see that it was not a dream or hell, but that they were indeed all alive and well, and that all he needed to do was just open his eyes and face reality. It took some time but thanks to Raimen and his threats '"Get your sorry ass out here Kai! If you burn down this building, I will presonally kick you around Eos and make you clean up the whole damn mess!!"' He always seems to be the one to reach him and make him go BAKA because once again the only thing Kai could do is look dumbfounded and think '"Once again this ghost is tossing threats at me"' Ok in the last review I called him clueless so can you tell me what he is now???? *yup, you guessed it STILL CLUELESS**laughs* But I, Raimen and Riki still love him.
Kai opens his eyes- YAY!!! he sees everyone Riki,Iason and....RAIMEN! Riki cries as do I. I cried when they were still tying to wake him. And Raimen well his pissed. Because once again CLUELESS KAI*that's what I named him* asks a very dumb question...WHY?!! Why was Raimen alive and not dead. So Raimen responds to that dumdass question with this. '"Why?!! You find your long lost lover, whom you just tossed across the room and was about to kick your ass where you stand, and all you have to say is WHY?!!"' Kai...Kai...CLUELESS KAI Raimen should have kicked your ass for asking that stupid thing, instead of just pulling him in your arms and kissing him like there was no tomorrow. That is what I would have done first then asked WHY. But that's just me. At least he made you beg for any kind of action '"But if you give me a smile and say 'RAIMEN IS ALIVE, HE IS NOT DEAD AS A DOORNOB NOR IS HE PUSHING UP DAISIES,' then MAYBE I'll kiss you."' And, you redeemed yourself by saying it and got your kiss. *but where's my kiss...I said it too**whines like little neglected baby* OH WELL, maybe next time*wink*
Kai' memories- he really must be headstrong and willful for him to have all his memories even after the mind blocks were put in place. But like he said '"it is more than the mental ability, it takes a strong will, endurance of 500 years of unadulterated psychic attacks, and the drive to survive. It also takes a great deal of love."' You have to respect that, in him.
Okay end of review, untill next chapter BYE LOVE!!!!!
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May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Talk about hot sex! Yeah, can't wait for Omaki's party. Bet your racking your brains to make it as hot as it can possibly be. Omaki, Kai and Raimen, oh my!
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May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU JUST MADE MY DAY, AND I HAVE TO TELL YOU IT STARTED OFF SUCKING. You want to know why because I was bit by a GOD DAMN DOG*pouts*last night it sucked ass royaly. But now I am happy and it is because of you. *grins sheepishly*
Okay on with the review!!!!!
First the learning of Kai's death-'felt pain in his chest, as a dagger cut deeply into his back piercing his heart. Kai staggered and turned around to see his betrayer’s eyes as he fell.' Now that is a site I wish I could not see.
Kai's murderer Lord Everett personal bodyguard of Lord Raimen why he did what he did- '“I witnessed Lord Raimen’s death by your hand Lord Oskuro, though your mind was not your own, the anger you conveyed was. And for that my Lord, I will never forgive you. Amoi is lost; I will spare you the pain of its ultimate destruction. Please forgive me, but I send you now to join Lord Raimen in death. When you see him, tell him, I loved him dearly, as I was fond of all the Royal family, but I can’t bear to see you, the last Royal fall in battle.”' This reason I can understand, at least he died by his hands a person loyal to them both and not by the hands of some bastard Elder.
Kai's walk through the fog- Gods I really hate that fog, always causing problems. Can't it help for once. Like Kai said '"What in hell is this?! I can’t see a blasted thing in this soup!"' I'm sorry but that was funny. And oh so true.
Raimen and Riki help Kai out of the fog and into the land of the living- At first things were going rather wrong in trying to do this. Kai did not want to believe that they were really there, Raimen even more because these two lines broke my heart. '“R-Raimen?! Raimen is that you? Is this how I’m to be tortured? By seeing the face of my long lost lover? NO! GO AWAY! I’ll not stand here and be tortured by your beauty…ghost be gone!!” and this one “NO. I’ll not relive that horror once more, it’s been too long. My sorrow is too much for my heart to bear, I will not turn around, I will not see those eyes…those haunting beautiful eyes, or that long blonde hair that caressed my face as I kissed it….no.”' You know can you make me cry anymore then I did when those words were said? To answer my own question yes you can but this time it was from laughter Raimen god I love him because he teases him and threatens him all in one breath.'“Kai my love, stay where you are! I’m coming Kai, I’m not going to lose you once again you old geezer, so you better stay put or I’ll have to put you over my knee for running away you big baby!!”' That got Kai's attention but the only thing his "pea brain" to quote Raimen can think of is '"Ghosts don't make threats"' God help him his clueless. But it worked and....are you ready....do you know what comes next come on say it with this preverted girl. THE MAKE OUT SCENE THAT HAS RIKI BLUSHING!!!!!!!!!!!!*drools* 'Once Raimen caught sight of Kai’s form he darted down the path and jumped into the arms of Kai, as the dumbfounded Warrior Lord slowly reached out and embraced Raimen.Kai kissed Raimen so powerfully; the tall Blonde could only give in to the kiss. Kai’s face was streaked with tears, as he looked into Raimen’s beautiful face, his eyes so blue, he lost his senses and began to caress his body against his. Riki began to blush as the two lovers drank from each other.' YAY REUNIONS RULE!!!!!!! But then you get me crying again when father and son are reunited.*sobs* '“Young man, come here” Kai spoke as Riki slowly walked towards his father who held out his hand once Raimen stepped away. Riki’s eyes were tearing up, and in the next moment he leaped into his father’s arms as Kai spun him around to the delight of Raimen who jumped with joy clapping his hands.' I was right with Raimen clapping for joy that they were finally back together. Then it came the long walk down memory lane, that was FUCKING HARD 'Suddenly out of nowhere, a sea of bodies began to appear as the fog was lifting, and the moans and cries of those fallen were reaching out towards Kai. The Warrior Lord began to tremble as their hands reached out in attempts to pull him back into the fog. Kai was horrified by their expressions as he suddenly began to recognize many of the faces, and the color drained from his face.' But who came for the save Raimen that beautiful Blondie'“Ohhh no you don’t! My love, you are going to hold your head up proud, and walk down this path. It is the path of honor, and you must not leave it. There is nothing in that fog for you, and I will travel to hell once more to push you out, even if I have to kick your gloriously sexy ass out of it!!”' Raimen I WOULD FOLLOW YOU ANYWHERE and it would also seem that Kai will to because he started moving again when he had slowed down.
Kai out and awake- Now this is where it is going to get really hard for everyone because he has more things to sort out than Raimen did. The fact that he killed his lover and now he's alive. The war that lasted forever. His own death. Now is reawakening. The Amoi he knew being gone and the one now. Man can things get anymore worse for him. But I said it before and I will say it now he has his son and his lover plus Iason and Jupiter to help him through it.
The getaway to the beach- Ah Iason, Riki and a private beach what more can a girl ask for...oh yeah Iason, Riki on a beach NAKED!!!!!*yes perverts rejoice* Iason's playful side comes out, and I would love to see that more often it suites him well. and the 69 you know that was the frist time Iason rushed to the finish line first. It had always been Riki, I'm surprised that he did not say anything about it.
Okay end of review see you on chapter 6 until then BYE LOVE!!!*smiles*
Okay on with the review!!!!!
First the learning of Kai's death-'felt pain in his chest, as a dagger cut deeply into his back piercing his heart. Kai staggered and turned around to see his betrayer’s eyes as he fell.' Now that is a site I wish I could not see.
Kai's murderer Lord Everett personal bodyguard of Lord Raimen why he did what he did- '“I witnessed Lord Raimen’s death by your hand Lord Oskuro, though your mind was not your own, the anger you conveyed was. And for that my Lord, I will never forgive you. Amoi is lost; I will spare you the pain of its ultimate destruction. Please forgive me, but I send you now to join Lord Raimen in death. When you see him, tell him, I loved him dearly, as I was fond of all the Royal family, but I can’t bear to see you, the last Royal fall in battle.”' This reason I can understand, at least he died by his hands a person loyal to them both and not by the hands of some bastard Elder.
Kai's walk through the fog- Gods I really hate that fog, always causing problems. Can't it help for once. Like Kai said '"What in hell is this?! I can’t see a blasted thing in this soup!"' I'm sorry but that was funny. And oh so true.
Raimen and Riki help Kai out of the fog and into the land of the living- At first things were going rather wrong in trying to do this. Kai did not want to believe that they were really there, Raimen even more because these two lines broke my heart. '“R-Raimen?! Raimen is that you? Is this how I’m to be tortured? By seeing the face of my long lost lover? NO! GO AWAY! I’ll not stand here and be tortured by your beauty…ghost be gone!!” and this one “NO. I’ll not relive that horror once more, it’s been too long. My sorrow is too much for my heart to bear, I will not turn around, I will not see those eyes…those haunting beautiful eyes, or that long blonde hair that caressed my face as I kissed it….no.”' You know can you make me cry anymore then I did when those words were said? To answer my own question yes you can but this time it was from laughter Raimen god I love him because he teases him and threatens him all in one breath.'“Kai my love, stay where you are! I’m coming Kai, I’m not going to lose you once again you old geezer, so you better stay put or I’ll have to put you over my knee for running away you big baby!!”' That got Kai's attention but the only thing his "pea brain" to quote Raimen can think of is '"Ghosts don't make threats"' God help him his clueless. But it worked and....are you ready....do you know what comes next come on say it with this preverted girl. THE MAKE OUT SCENE THAT HAS RIKI BLUSHING!!!!!!!!!!!!*drools* 'Once Raimen caught sight of Kai’s form he darted down the path and jumped into the arms of Kai, as the dumbfounded Warrior Lord slowly reached out and embraced Raimen.Kai kissed Raimen so powerfully; the tall Blonde could only give in to the kiss. Kai’s face was streaked with tears, as he looked into Raimen’s beautiful face, his eyes so blue, he lost his senses and began to caress his body against his. Riki began to blush as the two lovers drank from each other.' YAY REUNIONS RULE!!!!!!! But then you get me crying again when father and son are reunited.*sobs* '“Young man, come here” Kai spoke as Riki slowly walked towards his father who held out his hand once Raimen stepped away. Riki’s eyes were tearing up, and in the next moment he leaped into his father’s arms as Kai spun him around to the delight of Raimen who jumped with joy clapping his hands.' I was right with Raimen clapping for joy that they were finally back together. Then it came the long walk down memory lane, that was FUCKING HARD 'Suddenly out of nowhere, a sea of bodies began to appear as the fog was lifting, and the moans and cries of those fallen were reaching out towards Kai. The Warrior Lord began to tremble as their hands reached out in attempts to pull him back into the fog. Kai was horrified by their expressions as he suddenly began to recognize many of the faces, and the color drained from his face.' But who came for the save Raimen that beautiful Blondie'“Ohhh no you don’t! My love, you are going to hold your head up proud, and walk down this path. It is the path of honor, and you must not leave it. There is nothing in that fog for you, and I will travel to hell once more to push you out, even if I have to kick your gloriously sexy ass out of it!!”' Raimen I WOULD FOLLOW YOU ANYWHERE and it would also seem that Kai will to because he started moving again when he had slowed down.
Kai out and awake- Now this is where it is going to get really hard for everyone because he has more things to sort out than Raimen did. The fact that he killed his lover and now he's alive. The war that lasted forever. His own death. Now is reawakening. The Amoi he knew being gone and the one now. Man can things get anymore worse for him. But I said it before and I will say it now he has his son and his lover plus Iason and Jupiter to help him through it.
The getaway to the beach- Ah Iason, Riki and a private beach what more can a girl ask for...oh yeah Iason, Riki on a beach NAKED!!!!!*yes perverts rejoice* Iason's playful side comes out, and I would love to see that more often it suites him well. and the 69 you know that was the frist time Iason rushed to the finish line first. It had always been Riki, I'm surprised that he did not say anything about it.
Okay end of review see you on chapter 6 until then BYE LOVE!!!*smiles*
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May 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HI!!!!!!!!!!!! YES, YES, I REVIEWED ON THE OTHER SITE BUT I JUST CAN'T HELP MYSELF!!!!!! *grins sheepishly* Okay here I go again...but before I get started I want to talk to those who read the story and the reviews, but never seem to review themselves or RATE. WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM???? THIS IS A WONDERFUL STORY AND I AM NOT JUST TALKING ABOUT JUST THIS ONE EITHER ARISTIAN HOLIDAY IS BEAUTIFULLY WRITEN AND NO ONE EXCEPT ME REVIEWED. THERE'S NOT THAT MANY STORIES OUT THERE THAT I AM WILLING TO SAY SUCH A THING ABOUT. SO PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF Ai no Kusabi/Taming Riki REVIEW!!!!!!
*okay now that that is off my chest* Back to the review. I have to say that I really admire Kai he's not letting this cofusion, this fog pull him under. He is walking towards the unnone blinded but with his head held high. I mean come on how many people would do that, he said it himself '"He was never one to shy away from anything, and feared nothing"' not many people can say that. All I have to say to him is not to pay attention to all the other voices he hears and just focus on Riki's and Raimen's. They will lead him to the "light" so to speak. I know bad pun *laughs* but hey it fits. And, I see that you keep teasing us readers with little hints of SPANKINGS. Come on this preverted reader wants to read a good sex scene with a little spanking thrown in, I don't even care if its Riki, Iason, or both *pouts like baby* OH!!!!!!! and let Omaki watch or join, how 'bout both he would so love that. *gods I'm perverted**giggles* Okay now I will wait for chapter 5, this is me saying good BYE FOR REAL this time. BYE LOVE!!!!! *smiles*
*okay now that that is off my chest* Back to the review. I have to say that I really admire Kai he's not letting this cofusion, this fog pull him under. He is walking towards the unnone blinded but with his head held high. I mean come on how many people would do that, he said it himself '"He was never one to shy away from anything, and feared nothing"' not many people can say that. All I have to say to him is not to pay attention to all the other voices he hears and just focus on Riki's and Raimen's. They will lead him to the "light" so to speak. I know bad pun *laughs* but hey it fits. And, I see that you keep teasing us readers with little hints of SPANKINGS. Come on this preverted reader wants to read a good sex scene with a little spanking thrown in, I don't even care if its Riki, Iason, or both *pouts like baby* OH!!!!!!! and let Omaki watch or join, how 'bout both he would so love that. *gods I'm perverted**giggles* Okay now I will wait for chapter 5, this is me saying good BYE FOR REAL this time. BYE LOVE!!!!! *smiles*
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Just for you DarkAngelJudas! Enjoy....untamedlady
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GOD I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!! I KNOW, I KNOW THAT IS SO GAY BUT IT'S TRUE!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are updating these even faster then the other, and I thought THAT WAS FAST. GODS, I was rolling with laughter when Iason and Riki both fell in the bath *god help my side hurts* And, the SEX OMG shower where's the shower *I so forgive you for cutting us off the last chapter* Raimen now knows the truth only because he pulled rank on Jupiter, but hey what can you say. I know I would have done the same thing in his shoes. But, yet again I got misty eyes when it happened, and after when he was tying to process all of it. At least Jupiter contacted Iason and Riki right-a-way, so he had more answers to his questions and now hope as well. Now, we just need to get Kai to awaken and get him through this as well, but like they said it well be harder on him more than anything. But, with Raimen, Iason, and his son Riki he well do it. As you can see I LOVE this story and can't wait for chapter 4, untill then BYE LOVE *smiles*
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OH!!! THIS IS JUST FOR ME *I think your going to make me cry**I'm just kidding* put for real this time *will you marry me**laughs*
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanx for the review...yeah, it was funny writing the bath hall scene (LOL!) Until next time...untamedlady