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for Gifts

by Hnoss

schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, usually when i read stories that have a lot of chapters, i wait to review until i've finished the chapters available, but i felt the need to say this ahem **clears throat** WOOT FOR THE PRETTY SHINY!!!!!!!!! alright...now that that's out of the way, i will give a complete review after i finish reading the rest ^^
schedule October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ok, finished now and can give a full review **deep breath** ok, one, I LOVE it. Two, you have an awesome sense of humor and I very nearly snorted Dal out my nose while reading this story, similar to when I watched the series the first time and was no ready for naruse to come out screaming "My honey" and snorted mashed potatoes. Three, i really really really want another chapter, and four, please, please please, backstory!!!! it's fascinating!!!! **huggles and chocolate colored bishies**

Murray the Leprechaun
person j.s
schedule September 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
awesome awesome awesome

great now im sounding like my dance mat but yea
excellent story
hope it gets steamy soon
update please
person Anise
schedule August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, when I asked about Hiroya I had no idea he would be having such a dramatic impact on the story, very nice twist I can't wait to see how this is all going to pan out. Another great chapter I can't wait to read more :)
schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ohhh so good, please post more!!!!
person Anise
schedule August 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Such a nice long and cute update, poor Keita surrounded by all those gorgeous men, he's going to be hospitalized with anemia at the rate he's going :)
I had been wondering which one of the guys you would be giving the ice power to, Nakajima was one of my other guesses but it suits Omi and goes with his hair too! ^_^ actually I had also thought of Shinomiya because I can't help but think of the Xmen movie when the cute little iceman(boy) makes the ice rose, I could see Kouji doing that for Iwai.
Anywho, another fun chapter I like how they all have such fun together it was a great party and I can tell your definitely hinting at something that's going to be happening and I look forward to finding out what it is :)

On a slightly random note I wonder if the doctors friend(lover) Hiroya is awake and around or if he's still unconscious, hopefully for the doctors sake he has someone too.
person Saka
schedule July 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just found this story and I LOVE it. It's just so awesome to read. You gotta write more!!
schedule July 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL!!! I kinda feel bad for Keita. I do wonder if he'll survive the night without passing out from blood loss.

Update soon please!! Ganbatte!!
Ryn
schedule July 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was funny and cute. Makes me want to read the manga again.
person janas
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
ah kl..2 more chapters to read
hmm so its a threesom? wonderful! lol
its going great, there needs to be more gakuen heaven fics caus its a great anime
love da story, update soon!!!

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