rate_review Reviews

Very cute and adorable - I liked the end part where you had him walking into a lamppost

Naruse and Kazuki are kind of cute together but it's probably a good thing Keita's there to keep them from actually killing each other :) Interesting little background you gave them, I was wondering if there was more to the bickering than just what we had been seeing and the hint of a threesome is a rather drool worthy prospect ;)
I'm still having a lot of fun reading this story and look forward to getting back to the other characters, I'm interested to see what some of the other powers are (i have some guesses) but there's so many to choose from-looking forward to an update!

I can't believe I missed this story so far!. And AU!. Full of bishies!. Superpowerful bishies! xDD. But I found it, loved it and plan to review every chapter from now on ^-^. Both characterizations and plot are very interesting - correction, the characterizations are just plain adorable and the plot has so many hints of things to come that I can't wait to read what's next. Hehe, I specially loved when they acted silly (all those shiny and yummy comments ^-^) and Keita's naughty inner mind theater. I want Kazuki to hug me too <3.

I've found so few Gakuen Heaven's fics (good fics, that is) that I'm really, really glad to have found yours. It was an instant favorite for me, mostly due to the original imaginery and great lines. Keep up the good work!.

Hi, I just finished watching gaukuen heaven and yours is the first fanfic I read but I wanted to say that its great and I enjoyed it. Please continue your story.

MG

I just found this story and started reading it. I really enjoy the story. It is fun to read and very exciting wondering what will happen next. I can't wait till the next chapter.

Still reading and loving this though I have to ask, isn't an incubus a demon not necessarily a power. Not that it's all that big of a deal it fits Naruse perfectly, I kind of thought his ability would be giving off pheromones to make people fall for him so the incubus is rather perfect, I was just wondering because I can't really remember much about incubuses, maybe I'll have to google them :) Anyway I look forward to reading more if for no other reason than I want to see what powers you give to the other guys! ^_^

I love this story. Please continue with it. :-) I can't wait to see what you do next. I wonder what Naruse's perfect place is? Tennis court? lol Keep up the good work.

so cood
its like xmen meets gakuen heaven
lol
excellent
and keito is soo adorable..love him
update soon

Most of your stories are SHINY!

And I am liking this one

So far very well done, I like it a lot and definitely look forward to reading more of the story