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by Hnoss

person Anise
schedule June 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a really different story so far, it's been fun to see what powers you've given each of the guys, I thought Iwai's suited him perfectly and the idea of Niwa fluttering about doesn't surprise me in the least :) I also liked Keita's inner thoughts because he swears and thinks just like a typical teenager, which he is but all to often he tends to come across as overly sweet and naive and even if he is innocent in some things, it's nice to have him portrayed a little more realistically ^_^
It's a great story so far and I can't wait for more, I look forward to seeing what powers you give some of the other guys!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Omigod.
I fell in love with this already.
=DD

Please update!!!!! ^^
person shiva45
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I can't wait for the next installment. I wonder what gifts the others will have. Again keep up the good work until next time.

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