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by ArchangelM127

person malulu
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
...Hot.
Need more :333
person Hands of stone
schedule March 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, didn't see that coming.
schedule March 11, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Since I too know that feedback is a fanfiction writer's only reward, I just had to commend you on an amazing job, and of course the necessary 'please continue' inherent of all good works of writing. Your vision is amazing, preferable even, though admittedly I was one of those who had downloaded and watched the entire two seasons long before it was ever out in English.

I sincerely hope you continue! Your universe in enrapturing, and I hope you've been equally drawn into your vision as to continue until your decided end. So many possibilities...
person Sakura_youki
schedule February 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just got to read your updates. I too have suffered prolonging fanfic updates due to school or sickness, and I thank you for dedicating a chapter to me.

Awesome story!!
person hilde
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Nice! I don't usually read het fics but this one is worth reading!

Very good in my opinion!

*raises hand about the chicken beatings*
person mikey
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hiyas jsut to let you know you might wana change my anme when you dedicate the alpha readers i changed it myself tis nolonger animefreak859 that sounded a bit to obsesive for my taste so now its just mikey and btw love the story cant get nuf of it jsut thought it leave a post on here for once
person Anon
schedule January 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
cmon hurry up or i will track you down and force you to write at gunpoint!!!!!!!!!!! jk but do hurry plz
person Farsight
schedule January 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My god, thank you, a writer who listens to reviewers! I really am happy you changed it, I understand that Kallen being in such an environment would lead to some problems, hopefully not as far as it was as I hoped kallen would defend herself, but in a story that has built up a lot of fluff between the characters and has a great rhythm going, the idea of her being raped really did leave an awful taste in my mouth and seemed to lessen the strength of what you had built between the characters.

And I do have to applaud you an skillfully navigating Code Geass thus far and keeping the characters as they are (the changes in the story and such)

Keep up the good work and try not to keep us waiting to long (slight encouragement, not a reader bitching, just to clarify, lol)

BTW, if you ever need another beta reader I would be happy to volunteer

Email at Ezra_il@linuxmail.org
person x to the z
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter.
person Farsight
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*Raising hand*

...Wait...you mean we aren't going to assault him with faux poultry?

Since this is unedited, could you do me a teansy weansy favor and NOT rape kallen?

I'm sorry but that all just left a bitter taste in my mouth to be honest, I mean, I can understand that naturally there would be issues with kallen in a bunny suit and all, but don't RAPE her!

Please, this is coming from somebody who checks your page on a semi-daily basis just for updates, don't do that to your fans!

If you are going to edit this, please please please make just a minor change!

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