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January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So that's how you changed the Black Rebellion. I like how Kallen doesn't blame Lelouch and understands him.
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January 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon. There's not enough Lulu/Kallen fics!!!!
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November 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm. Odd, I would have thought that you would have gone with the Kamiya island episode. There was a lot of potential for you to work with there, and I personally would have been interested in seeing how the now love-struck Black Knights interacting with Euphi and Suzaku. As for how this chapter went, well personally it wasn't my favorite and in fact somewhat worries me about what you have planned.
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November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hey whats up? this is pretty good, and i would like to see more.
and even if you don't feel like posting it online just send me it in a e-mail or something.
hey check out a couple of my stories on my profile. my name is mplantz so go read acouple of my stories.
m.plantz@yahoo.com
MPlantz
and even if you don't feel like posting it online just send me it in a e-mail or something.
hey check out a couple of my stories on my profile. my name is mplantz so go read acouple of my stories.
m.plantz@yahoo.com
MPlantz
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You are doing a wonderful job at character portrayal, particularly Zero/Lulu. You absolutely must continue.
Oh, and the second scene of the first chapter, yep, I always draw parallels between this and V for Vendetta too. Good thinking.
Oh, and the second scene of the first chapter, yep, I always draw parallels between this and V for Vendetta too. Good thinking.
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October 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is an incredible sweet fic. Personally I think Lelouch needed something to ground him. I think a few screws might have been coming loose near the end from how he must always seperate himself from others.
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October 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty cute so far. Interesting alternate universe scenario you're starting, and I'm interested to see where you go with it.
"Sore wa himitsu desu"? Am I sensing a Slayers fan here? :P
My one recommendation is that you do something to set apart thoughts from the prose. It's just a little confusing as it is. Most people, in my experience with fanfiction, do so by either using italics or single-quotes.
"Sore wa himitsu desu"? Am I sensing a Slayers fan here? :P
My one recommendation is that you do something to set apart thoughts from the prose. It's just a little confusing as it is. Most people, in my experience with fanfiction, do so by either using italics or single-quotes.
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October 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this idea that you are going with right now.
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October 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really cool idea.
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October 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww thank you for the shout out.
I think its so cute that Kallen likes his hair. I do like that you're not making Lulu too soft, because he's not. And I like the intelengence and cold caculating of Lelouch.
I think its so cute that Kallen likes his hair. I do like that you're not making Lulu too soft, because he's not. And I like the intelengence and cold caculating of Lelouch.