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for Oblivious

by Alyndrya

person RChan
schedule May 2, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Dear lord, this has quickly become my favorite story. Well thought out and very well written. I cannot put it down and am scared I'll never see another chapter! What have you done! ......... I still thank you for putting it in my life.

person cathy
schedule May 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
please continue
person Mitsuki
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Do you ever plan to put up more chapters? I've read Oblivious on the strictly Sailor Moon fanfiction site and there was only one more chapter than what's on here but it seemed to be unfinished there too. I'd like to read the rest of it. :)
person Mitsuki
schedule January 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I take that back. It's on DGRFA but still, I'd like to read the rest of it.
person Auburn
schedule December 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This story is freakin awesome! I can not wait until you finish the third part. I'm going to be dying of suspense!! Keep up your awesome-ness. :)
schedule July 25, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Not bad thus far, though you did make a tiny mistake at the end of chapter two there - Usagi should have the yellow crystal, not the red. Zoicite got the red one, along with the, green, blue, and violet ones, while Mamoru made off with the orange and indigo ones. Just saying. Either way, looking forward to chapter three. Until then. Laters.
person Brandy Presley
schedule April 10, 2012 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!!!!! *squeal!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Oh please continue soon. I'm loving this. it's cute and funny ad also very intense I almost cried when I realized I was at the end. oh please oh please oh pleeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaasssseeeeeeeeeeee continue. Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!please please please please.
person Lq
schedule January 26, 2012 at 12:00 AM
more please
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story.. But I think it needs a different story.. You should take it a bit further to where She's at his apartment. But as I said I like the story :)
schedule September 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved it, its fresh and diferent from everything done until now, update fast please!!!

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