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February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
WHY DIDN'T YOU FINISH????? CONTINUE, PLEASE!!!!
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March 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I look forward to reading this
story everytime you update. I dont want to stop but I think i hit my angst limit. they have suffered enough.
story everytime you update. I dont want to stop but I think i hit my angst limit. they have suffered enough.
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
no tell me you just did not kill or injure gwendel please!!!!!!!!!!!!omg i think i am going to cry please update soon.
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January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like this story! Like, heeps interesting.
Omg, at first, when you said something about a shadow coming out of Murata's body, I thought he'd, like, gotten pregnant or something, and coach-dude was like, giving him an abortion. I don't know why, it was totally insane of me to think that, and then I nearlly threw up because of it... I don't know why I'm even mentioning it.
Ok, so it's like, 4:15 in the morning, and I've been here for nearlly 4 hours reading your story, so I think I might get some shut eye, neh? Really really really good. Can't wait for next chapter!
Ella
Omg, at first, when you said something about a shadow coming out of Murata's body, I thought he'd, like, gotten pregnant or something, and coach-dude was like, giving him an abortion. I don't know why, it was totally insane of me to think that, and then I nearlly threw up because of it... I don't know why I'm even mentioning it.
Ok, so it's like, 4:15 in the morning, and I've been here for nearlly 4 hours reading your story, so I think I might get some shut eye, neh? Really really really good. Can't wait for next chapter!
Ella
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January 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh clusterfucking hell, no! NOOOOO!!!! Not again! You are gonna kill me woman.
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January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
h you can't do this you can't stop there that's so mean.....why? why? why? why? are you tortuing us like this please update soon. and is the figure Gwendel.
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January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
update update update please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i read both stories in 2 hours and i am hooked......great job!!!!!
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December 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*sigh* You had to make Murata care for the guy? I guess that's how it goes though; the real monsters usually don't look monstrous. Not at first.
This guy has created some major problems and needs some payback. Torture is the only option!
I feel terrible for Murata; he is feeling so hopeless and only wanted someone to love him. Instead he has to endure such horrible consequences. I am hoping for a happy ending, but understand if that is not your plan. I absolutely love the angst of this story. You jump between the characters expertly. Great job with this story; I hope you update soon! I will be anticipating the next chapter. =)
This guy has created some major problems and needs some payback. Torture is the only option!
I feel terrible for Murata; he is feeling so hopeless and only wanted someone to love him. Instead he has to endure such horrible consequences. I am hoping for a happy ending, but understand if that is not your plan. I absolutely love the angst of this story. You jump between the characters expertly. Great job with this story; I hope you update soon! I will be anticipating the next chapter. =)
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
It is a very good story, so very dark and angsty.
It's going to be amusing with some Shori whumping.
It's going to be amusing with some Shori whumping.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh my god is that the bastard that raped gwendle oh plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update soon