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Review, I can hardly think! That was hot! The only thing better would have been for Aya to run to Yohji's room to beat him up only to catch him in the act! When is Yohji going to get the point that it's the person you are attracted to, not the gender. Oh, what a predicament, when they are both so ... frustrating. One of these two has got to be brave and confront the obvious. I really like this story. Keep the updates coming!

This is a really good story! I have enjoyed your chapters and have been waiting for an update. I like Aya and Yohji, too, especially Aya and hope you go on to finish this. You seem to write them very sensitively. I hope that Schwarz bastard gets his. Crawford should die for doing that to Aya! Soften Yohji's heart, please!

Go Yohji, go!!! At first I was glad that he ‘trapped’ Aya, actually was hoping Yohji will ‘force’ out some sort of confession from him, but well…it would be too soon anyway. Aya’s reaction is totally Aya, he’s a violent kitten after all. I hope Yohji can stand his ground, if he’ll let Aya go right now, I think I would die waiting for another confrontation like this.

p.s. Wow, holiday in Japan! You’re lucky. I spend my holidays (almost two weeks) in the village in Siberia hehe :)

H! I like this story so far! Finally, Yohji’s POV! His thoughts jump from past to present – it’s just so like him. But we don’t know yet how he actually feels towards Aya (aside from the friendship), so maybe there is a long road ahead for our couple.

Glad that Aya-chan is alive and back into her brother life, but I guess her first attempt to fix Ran’s personal life failed…

And the second part of chapter has a little angst! Ok, I confess, I love it when the boys are suffering (as long as there is still hope for happy ending in the future), so let them suffer a little more.

Well, nothing much to say at the moment, because the story is not very long yet. So about criticism – sorry, can’t do, it’s too early to tell, can’t come up with something bad right now. If you want critique – write something horrible first, like… umm, no, don’t wanna give you bad ideas haha, so just continue! And don’t hurry, usually updates worth the wait, so I’ll be back to check up latter!

I am quite enjoying this fic so far. please continue asap.

Hi! Great start, I`m glad that there is new fic in this fandom. I hope that it’s just beginning of much longer story because I’m already hooked. I liked Aya’s POV (actually he’s one of my favorite characters and I can’t read Weiss’ story if he’s not there he he). I liked that Yohji here took off his ‘playboy’ mask and show his other side.

So, I was reading and waiting to see how those two got together and BAM!!... the 3rd chapter! No Yohji!

You just killed me there! Now I need to know what happened next, so continue, pretty please?

p.s. I wonder if we’ll see Brad again. By the way, you wrote him pretty good - pedantic, self-confident, always in control and just sexy bastard.