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for Perverted Puppeteer

by VFSNAKE

person penumbra
schedule April 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic premise!

although I wish a little more asonance and time had been given to the grammer...

But I like your style!

If you're ever looking for an editor, I'm receptive to a project.
schedule March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm surprised shinji isn't using his new power to make gendo's life a living hell. Well,one can hope. :P
person Church
schedule January 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I find this fic purdy good ill be looking forward to more :)
schedule December 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
very nice story
schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please up this story soon. I like to see Shinji with many girls.
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update this story soon, it is a really good story and I like it a lot. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
schedule November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Cool thanks for the new chapter dude! I was hoping for a threesome in chapter 3 (small joke) but so far still pretty good. Can't wait for an update in your other stories too. Keep up the great work and I can't for some good chapters soon!
person Barrier Block
schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I do aree with you,quamp on the OOCnes of each of the characters. But on the other hand I will have to disagree with the whole love thing. Not everyone is looking for love you know. If I´m the mood for pussy but don´t want to commit then I search for a woman who wants a one night stand. Having a girlfriend is so overrated. It´s even worse should you get married and later dirvorced in the USA. Half of what you earn goes to her. As for dominating women,so? That way she won´t run off to another guy. As long as there´s no BSDM elements int his then I´m fine.

This fic better have some Asuka/Rei/Shinji threesome in it or else it´s major fail.



schedule November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not that bad but not particularly good either. It was okay, but by no means your best work. But practice makes perfect so keep it up. And I'm very glad that Shinji will be getting Rei in this fic.
schedule November 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice chapter can't wait to see more and hopefully another round with Misato

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