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November 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter dude, I hope you up date again soon on more of your stories. Any chance of Shinji getting a threesome with either Asuka and Rei or Misato and Ritsuko? After all Shinji has got to be alot better than his "minute man" dad! Keep up the great work and I can't wait for more fun reading.
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November 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice, fun story. Hope to see more.
SailorNemesis
SailorNemesis
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, but I think you should make Asuka submissive or maybe a threesome with Ritsuko and Misato.
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October 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
your story suck
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit that was hot. I've always wanted to see a story like this, but lacked the talent to write it myself.
Very well done, I eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Very well done, I eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You want a review? Okay...
This is just a poor excuse for bad characterization. It also appears that you are obsessed with dominating women and are using Shinji as a straw man to live out your fantasies of dominating women. That's not how love works. If you can't stand that, GET OVER IT. I think you'll find that if you respect women, they will reward you for it.
This is just a poor excuse for bad characterization. It also appears that you are obsessed with dominating women and are using Shinji as a straw man to live out your fantasies of dominating women. That's not how love works. If you can't stand that, GET OVER IT. I think you'll find that if you respect women, they will reward you for it.
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October 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good, I've seen better but then again, I'm comparing this to Home/Bodies and that was just kickass. Check that out for some ideas if you haven't yet.
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October 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is like your naruto story isn't it?
I like it.
Keep it coming!!
I like it.
Keep it coming!!