rate_review Reviews

about #7...

Well, I can honestly say I haven't seen any terms like in the stories I've read
so far, but then again I'm only sticking to certain pairs & reading 5 stories.

Pet Peeves? I can tell you now the thing that irks me the most is when an author
takes a strong character and decides to make him ''submissive'', even though this
character has shown in CANON that he is anything but that.

Example: in the Harry Potter section, with Harry & Draco pairings. I don't know WHY
people love to see Harry as submissive, when his character has shown that he has a
strong personality with his giving nature, PLUS he can be volatile when he thinks
the world isn't being fair to him.

NOW, if I want to break it down based on real life, then I can see Harry in his private moments with someone wanting to cuddle, whisper sweet nothings & maybe
give control every now and then to his partner. But, NOT be a submissive/Uke in
the bedroom EVERYtime, it would be a 'give & take' relationship with him.

..and the same goes for Draco, Gods knows how I've seen him portrayed as a flaming
pansy in past stories and he's too full of himself to just GIVE complete control
to someone, he would expect some reciprocation. It would be 50-50 with him.

...and I think some authors got sick of seeing that, too.

I know what you mean about that whole "characters using fan girl terms". And while we're at that-- why does one character ALWAYS have to be on the bottom while the other one tops all the time? real gay couples often "switch" or share the roles. and even when they're on the bottom, they don't act like women or something like that. I fucking hate that cliche. ^^;;

I could never envision L or even Light being that blushing "uke". If anything, both of them could easily be a very dominating, demanding "bottom" while the other "tops" and also dominating and demanding. If you know what I mean. :)

Well, I have to admit this is interesting, but I have a feeling you're going to
have Misa mention that Light was Kira out of spite, once she finds out whose child
L is carrying...and that's when everything go downhill.

where does Mello get off, he really needs his ass beat. Poo Matt, I hope they take Matt out of there and send him to L.

I'm really diggin' what happened so far. keep up the good work :)

a....cat....delayed you?

*doesn't know if she should laugh or just moan*

It's not a bad excuse, it just reminds me of something personal with my bf and his giant sized assed cat (why they named him shorty is beyond me.)

oh and matt being successor just made my day; it's rare if that happens in a death note fic :B I love the video game boy because he is so much like me (except I have no mello *pouts*)

Still keep up the good work and at least update something is better than nothing ne? I'm lazy myself in terms of fics....that I haven't finished.

Oh L was just mean doing that to Light.*smiles* And yes L shopping is going to be fun.

ocassionally I read death note love yaoi stories but there are times that I read true to the word 'yaoi' and just want smut.

That and I am still annoyed at how death note had more plot holes than yummy cheese, sexist, and just generally fucked up that we good authors need to clean it up.

Still the characters are satisfying which is why I read fiction (and I love L no matter that most of the plot holes come from him, like the whole bombing incident that they NEVER made a story or explain about it...)

but enough ranting, good beginning but besides maybe matt or mello I have no idea who is explaining this story XD It doesn't seem near enough.....lol

still I'll keep on reading it because it's smut day, I need a good read, and I still hate how artist get lazy like in the middle of the damn plot (god forgiven if I do the same stupid mistake and forget important stuff like CHARACTER development or plot pick up.)

you don't suck dammit~!

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*shrug* I am trying to prep you up but maybe that was kinda...stupid? But still this is a good read, different from most 'L get pregu' stories (oh man the sappyness and ooc goodness of kira/raito after he finds out the news in oh so many stories...like it's so horrible.)

Still I hope raito doesn't fight L because I wouldn't be happy at the bastard. (it shows he is much more of a dumbass)

I'll review every chapter like most stories ^_^

hahaha mas-kun is just...he just makes every story funny. I am curious though if it's going to be a boy or a girl.....

*laughs at the though of a girl raito with black hair*

oi...oi......oi....fat....L.....*still laughing*

but besides that thought that gives me giggles every time I think about it, what will happen when kira comes back? He can't kill L while he is preggers....mmmm....and Misa's going to be PISSED

.....*shivers at the thought of L fighting misa*