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Curiosity kill the cat here hahaha you know I don't really like L and Light as a couple because Raito doesn't deserve L, simple as that, he was a bastard, I hate him, simple as that, I know some blame was on the Death Note, it corrupted his already not so good mind, I pity him in the end but I still hate him. I am saying this first so you can understand how much I love your story, is different and special, you make me want to give the bastard the chance to be a decent person ha ha ha. Hope the name "it was never a love story" is an ironic tittle and that at the end Light will do the right thing and take responsability for his actions!!! Maybe their relationship didn't start as a lovely couple but they fall in love in the middle of the caos that is having a baby :P as many other couples ha ha ha but all depends of what you want to happen in your story. I was thinking over the fact that L was the one pregnant, I think the best gay couples are the ones that have a balanced relationship and they see each other as equals instead of fighting for dominance, in this case that will be difficult but they can make it, anyway in my humble opinion, the only way that I think Light never see that L has a vagina was that from the 3 times they had sex, the first one and the last one, L was on top but the time they were drunk and they don't remember how it happen, that was the time Light was not only on top but... how to say this?... he use the correct orifice ha ha ha not the one he was expecting but if we talk about the correct use of every part of the body he use the correct orifice ha ha ha. Sorry any mistales here, English is not my native language, just want to say that I love your story, please, don't care how long it is going to be, just update soon *puppy eyes*, thanks for sharing!!! bye

I really like what I've read so far, can't wait to see what happens next with L being preggy and all. Just thinking of it, just makes me think of how kawaii he's going to look with a round belly.*smiles*