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for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

schedule September 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok just read all this in a week of reading roughly nine chapters a night. I dont usually read het more of a yaoi reader myself and writter as the name suggests. (needless to say i love how you've worked anderson into this his my fave hellsing character)

I love love love this and want more more more. what was that thinbg in walters ear? oh god i'm so glad he is not a traiter and that scene a few chapters back with the loo room seras and alucard omg loved it if not a little grossed out by the menstral thing but still awsomely hot (needed a cold shower after that) please update!
person MK
schedule August 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great fic. The pace and build up, while seemingly slow at times works for explaining on the background of Alucard and Seras. Also, it is great to see how their relationship develops. Love that grows is a lot more profound and greater in depth than one that is sudden. So far read till chapter 13, although each chapter feels a little short it's good. Minor typos here and there. It would be interesting to see Alucard's background more. The greatest strength of this fic is in the discourse between Alucard and Seras, how they communicate on almost the same level despite their master-servant relationship, and how they are different yet alike. Seras has an aggressive side underneath her submissive demeanor as Alucard pointed out ("marauder mentality") and Alucard has compassion and tenderness underneath his uncaring, aloof exterior. Will they consider bonding and having a family? How, why and when? Will review the other chapters as I proceed. Keep it up!
person concerned
schedule August 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
regardless of whether or not u finish this i just have to ask if your alright? you are, without question or shadow of a doubt, the best hellsing fanfiction writer i have come across. wish u well and hope u update
person sandmaster
schedule August 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, just started this piece of work, and it took me all of....4 hours to get through it, being able to stare at a computer screen for that long at one time is testament enough to the power of the work.

I'm overjoyed with your recent inclusion of father anderson, I felt that as a character he was almost...wasted...in the series, granted, that could be my wolfwood fanboy coming through.
all in all, I find your work well researched, well executed and an understanding of the darker desires allow this story to be, erotic, without it becoming a lurid fap fest, or even worse a three sentence story focusing on tits and ass.

Enjoying the evolution of the master servant relationship, it reminds me very much of real master servant relations, granted with the aspect of immortality and bloodplay thrown in. look forward to the next few chapters, and best of luck in your future projects

-Sandmaster
person NKS
schedule August 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is one of the first stories that i've been so hooked on in so long that includes such a great deal of chapters... i'm ensnared within the plot... please update ><
schedule August 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic/ When are you going to update. I realy want to know what that thing in Walter's ear was and I want to continue to follow the story betwen Alucard and Seras. Please update soon. I really love this fic.
person kotori99
schedule August 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! good plot. good characters, good non-sex!
Might've been a typo or two but other than that this is one of my all-time favorites I've ever read here...and I've read a lot!

PLEASE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!! *begs and whimpers*
I'll give you fan art if you do!
P.S. I'm a pretty decent artist myself, it won't be just crap art with happy content!
person Kabub
schedule July 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is just one wonderful story!
I love the way your interpretation of any of the displayed characters is deeply thought-through and well displayed. This fan-fiction is compelling, absolutely hot, and most of all, makes absolutely sense. I wish I could read more soon but the notes in the chapters show that you have a rather busy life with very unexpected things happening. I appreciate that you kept for so long with this story, and I really hope a new chapters is on the way... or a few lol :P
thank you very much for this wonderful piece of literature :)

Kabub
person Arii
schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I just stumbled upon this gem. It is truly wonderful.

Thank you for writing. I hope to read more soon.
person Rayne
schedule July 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
"Men took one look at my companion and thought twice about approaching me. Their eyes would go over my barely concealed breasts, travel to my hips, then rest on Alucard and snap to the opposite direction."
hahaha that part almost made me spit potato chips. Alucard is so scary...

I really like your story. one of the better fanfictions I've read in a while

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