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by Savaial

person Savaial
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just an FYI- I'm having to work quite a bit (in the middle of it, actually), and I don't expect a new chapter to come up for several days. I apologize. And, for those concerned, Walter is NOT dead. I would never do that to Walter, even if he's a very dark character. Hmmm... Especially because he's a dark character. Villains are my favorite.
Also, without giving too much away, Anderson and Doctor Kayne are not the ones who put the device in Walter's ear. I just realized how mean I've been to Walter in this fic...
schedule November 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
you probably already know this, but just to be sure...

your story rocks; i was to rate your story among my top favorites, it would be in the top 5. seriously, please keep it up; i'm literally salivating for the next chapter
person Zebby
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I don't know if you got my first review. I sent it when aff decided to hit the curb.

BUT! I must say. I absolutely ADORE your story (even if I will cry if Walter dies).

I'd never even heard of Hellsing before and had to look it up just to put faces in the story. Surprisingly, they looked almost as I'd imagined by reading your ficfic. (Except Police Girl's breasts. That is just... ANIME for you. >.< Sexcist. ANYWAY!)

What I'm saying is, keep writing. You have a great talent.
person shadow
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so walter really isn't a traitor, this is getting very interesting. what did he have in his ear, how'd he get it in the first place?
and what of Alucard and Seras, what's going to happen next?
can't wait to read more, much more.
keep up the good work.
person mosh
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The sexual tension is to die for! If Alucard called for me in such way i dont think i could resist him..he's so tempting in his ways. How noble and fascinating thatr Anderson would give up his blood for Seras. I must say that was a sexually tempting scene. Though somehow i suspect him for hurting Walter though i hope not. I have grown to love Anderson he's part of hellsing now and shouldn't be killed off like that. We all know that if its him he's going to have seras and alucard against him and he'll lose royally. I hope Walter's ok after this ordeal. Is there going to be a small sexy time with Walter and Integra? Would be awesome there's no need for a lemon per se (though if you want to go ahead:D ) but alittle something something to heat up to newly weds story. I know that the insanely hot and dark lemon between Alucard and Seras is coming because the tension is to getting worse and worse. Keep up the good work always checking for your update.

Succes!
Mosh!
person Nichelle
schedule November 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
another great add!!! i am glad walter isnt evil! please add soon cant wait!
person riz
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol.... seems like everyone is at their peak too...
woot i shall join them in their "omg i cant wait to see wat will happen back in the mansion"
you're really good in cliff hanging the story and thats the part i love most *masochist*

great chapter!! i could throw a small little celebration to see that walter is no traitor!!!
cant wait for the next chapter! and u just made me ship alucardxanderson *killself*

dont end this story in less than hundred i tell ya!
ill be ur loyal reader for times to come XD
person Angel Reaper
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Anderson is really going to great lengths to protect Seras against Alucard. I'm kinda impressed that he would even offer some of his own blood. It's been a while since Alucard has tried anything sexual on him, I had sort of forgotten how morbidly fascinating it is. Speaking of Alucard, I'm a bit amused at how needy he's being for Seras. He's so quick to change his mind...

Everybody (by that, I mean other fanfiction writers) seems to conveniently forget that new vampires are created from males biting females (and vice versa), so thank you for remembering and sticking to a clearly explicit rule of vampirism.

What a twist with Walter! I thought there might of been some sort of implant in his head (the earache and the nosebleeds were good indications), but I never expected it to come out. I wonder if Walter forced it out himself (if possible), or if it was forced out by the ones controlling it after he refused to attack Seras... The real question I suppose is when it was implanted. Perhaps when Walter was sprayed with the Regenerist serum? Anyway, it's such a relief to know that Walter isn't a traitor.

Keep writing well!
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
NNOOOOOO! I hope Walt isn't really dead! He is such a good thing for Seras...

And shame on Alucard! But who can blame him really lol

<3 it!!
person OmegaX
schedule November 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Those fucking bastards! I don't know who did it, why, or the reason, but they will pay for controlling Walter! Something tells me this is going to get more personal, you don't attack the new Husband of the Hellsing Family and get away from it...


This is going to be a bloodbath, isn't it. Alucard, the No Life King, his Queeen Seras, the Fallen Priest Anderson, and a Regenerator enhanced Walter. Whatever lies in front of them will die the most painful deaths....

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