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for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i love love love this story!!!!1 i think its my favorite Hellsing story ever! you are a great writer! i love the interaction between seras and alucard!!! you are totally awesome
person Mosh
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet jesus I screamed while reading this chapter it was delicious,disturbing and fascinating. The moment you used the menstrual sexual moment I immediately remembered your other fanfic where he does it to Integra [EVERYBODY READ THE OTHER FANFIC TOO MADE BY THE WRITER OF MIDIAN EVOLUTION IT'S REALLY GOOD] I realised that midian evolution is a sequel of your first fic which is well done you really made a nice process between the two fanfic i loved it. This chapter was intense and judging by your detailed way of writting I can only imagine how brutally cool and morbid your lemon is going to be. This is the first time that i've read a fanfic where the sex isn't human-like or uberromantic. Ofcourse there has to be tender moments and moments where they show their feelings just like what you did at the end of the chapter where Alucard cries with Seras. However they are vampires, creatures of the night,demons on earth,so i think it's kind of unrealistic when writters make them have sex with each other in the missionary position lol I know I'm going far with this but COME ON they're VAMPIRES...I think they (especially Alucard) can do better..literally lol. Oh yeah i also wanted to ask out of curiousity : are you going to make a lemon/lime/love/romantic chapter for walter and integra or are you only going to keep it to this rate? Not asking out of critism i was just wondering about it today. I am very curious with what is going to happen in Instanbul specially because of Walter's situation and Alucard's history with the Turks. Poor Anderson needs his italian woman for support. Keep it up!
person Anon
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another wonderful chapter. Glad that Seras and Anderson are getting confortable with each other
person Lian
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Seras, never say never. There are things called unplanned pregnancies and it can happen no matter the birth control method one might use. After all, God(Voltaire) works in mysterious ways. (giggle)

Excellent chapter, as usual, but should she have shared the secret of Quincy's true parentage? I don't want another misunderstanding between those two silly vampires.
person lara5170
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just wrote a long review & then the screen flashed & all my writing was gone.
I'll send you an email
I love this & I have been so looking forward to more of the progress between S & A , I'm looking forward for more
& now I'm horrified about Walter,I hope it's not too late & we haven't lost him for good.













person regios4ever@hotmail.com
schedule November 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I seriously check everyday, to see if you update and get so giddy when you do. lol. Loved this chapter, Anderson and Seras are so friendly with each other, it suits them.
person shadow
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow, this chapter was so awesome, so she did manage to make him fall. and fall he did. i can't wait for the next chapter and i hope they get back home soon.
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic new chapter!! It was very exciting in the beginning and very emotional in the end. I love how you write about Seras and Alucards's "relationship". To me, you describe it perfectly. I can't wait for the next few chapter. Keep up the good work.
person regios4ever@hotmail.com
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well i'll be damned! Now im not usually into bloodplay, cuz I think it's kinda icky but i'd be lying if I said this wasn't some HOT stuff I just read. You have a way of making things so intense; to the point where you can actually SEE it. Alucard's desire and fire are so desperate in a totally believable way, you just know he really wants Seras. Awesome chapter =)
person Angel Reaper
schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry, I didn't recoil in horror. I may have made a few faces though. Even if you take the story in a direction that I might not like, it's still so compelling to read.

Wow, I didn't expect Alucard to force Seras into menstruating just by wanting to have sex with her. Then again, he is the most powerful vampire on earth- he can probably do a lot of things we'd never expect. I'm usually skeptical about vampire babies (It's such a paradox, how can two undead create another undead? And if vampires don't age, wouldn't the children stay children forever?) but I'd almost like to see your take on the subject. Also, I wasn't sure before if this story was related to your other story, but now it's clearer with Alucard taking the menstrual blood.

Mm, it's been a while since there was action like that between them... you always seem to carefully pick where and when heated moments happen so that the pace and the plot of the story isn't completely about sex. I like that, because a lot of other fan fics just try to cram in as much citrus material as possible.

Keeep up the good work! I wonder how well Alucard and Seras can cope with staying apart...

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