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for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

schedule November 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I must say that every chapter just gets better and better. I also think I speak for everyone when I say I cannot WAIT for them to get back to headquarters either!

<3 this chapter
person shadow
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
poor walter, i wonder what's wrong with him. i hope he doesn't turn evil.
and what of Alucard and Seras's relationship? will it ever be more than what it is now? will he really love her?
bye, bye
person OmegaX
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
My internet dies for a week, and I'm surprised with so much bounty, it's almost overwhelming!


Anderson's outburst was the best part of it, I think, although by saying best, I mean nothing more than it was the best out of greatness. I've missed M.E. in my week away
person Niongi
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I write Seras/Alucard and I absolutely LOVE THIS! The attention to detail in the book Dracula (which some writers don't even read before writing on S/A such a shame really) To the "subjugation" proof. All in and all I love it! I’m on chapter twelve and I can’t believe people aren’t reviewing they better be! Any chance I can archive my favorite scenes on my website? Niongisdomain.com please let me know!
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You frightened me for a moment. I would have screamed bloody murder if Seras became pregnant. Thank you for not going down that road, even if the possibility exists. I loathe the idea of vampire babies. Dhampirs I can tolerate, to a point, but goddammit, vampires are dead. :P

Sorry for not reviewing lately again, but you seem to have a gaggle of eager fans following you as it is and another wouldn't make a difference. I'll just mention now that your recent chapters are superb. Bravo.

Lady D
person OmegaX
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, Seras is full of surprises, isn't she? First her heart, now her reproductive system. What's next for our dear Draculina, I wonder.... The King's desire is far more apparent now than before, perhaps Seras will get her bondage lessons after all?


Also, something I've been meaning to mention. I feel horrible for not reviewing as often as I'd like, but most of the time, I never feel as if anything I say would be original, as some of your other reviewers almost always have seen the newer chapters before I, and thus hit every point I would have mentioned. Regardless, I hope you konw that I would echo most of their praise, especially since you've come back and given us more and more this past month.


Always,

Anonelbe
person Savaial
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'd like to add something here, for info purposes. Some of you enjoy Walter, and some of you don't. Since he is integral to my plot, I cannot simply take him away or take the focus from him. In my opinion, Hellsing is a machine, and Walter oils it. He really isn't taking up too much of this fic, I don't believe. I'm sorry if this disappoints a few of you, but he's needed in Midian Evolution.
person Savaial
schedule November 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lady Draculea, would you please email me?
person Angel Reaper
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^^ Drunk Anderson really is interesting to watch. Especially with his brief crisis of religion. I almost get the feeling that he might convert to Protestantism after all, or follow a Martin Luther-like path... But Anderson really isn't Anderson unless he's a Judas priest, as Alucard pointed out. Perhaps more affirmation is needed in the future.

I'm very worried about Walter now; this recent chapter points further to him being a traitor. I still haven't decided what would be a good reason for him to betray Hellsing. I might just be spinning myself in circles though- the simplest answer is often the correct answer. Poor Seras, she might have to fight Walter in the end...

I really liked the Alucard-Seras moment. Seras' heart starting up again was certainly a pleasant surprise. I suppose when you think about it, Seras does everything with an honest wholeheartedness. Her love for Alucard is no exception, even if he can't figure out why she loves him yet.

Well, thank you for the update. Keep up the good work!
person Anon
schedule November 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I've never seen Seras portrayed in such a beautiful and powerful light before. I congratulate you. Seras and Aluycard's scene was passionate, heart warming, and just perfect.
It's getting REAL intense now. I love it. You've created a story that people like my self strive to live and grow off of. You've truley and sincerely captured the attention of your readers by pulling at their hearts with stuff like this. I'm reading over this fic again and again and I still can't get enough. You dig into the true psych of the characters, and everytime things start going right you throw in a new twist. I've never seen a story where this was done so well. As always, this is an exceptional story, and thank you very much for sharing it with us.

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