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for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

person Lian
schedule October 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Don't kill Walter, please! The suspense is killing me. It was bad enough in the manga.
person lara
schedule October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
need more............can't wait...........holding breathe
person lara
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
More, more, more !!!!!!! now that you've begun again it's all I can think about. Your writing is,as always, amazing.
Thank you.
person shadow
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this chapter was very interesting, i especially like the part where the mere mention of Aluvard's name scared the shit out of people.
keep up the good work.
person Olivia
schedule October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. It's great. I'm so addicted to it. Please continue :)
person Angel Reaper
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
^^ Drunk Anderson is interesting- I hope we see a few more moments of him like that. I wonder if he can stay drunk though- being a Regenerist probably means that alcohol passes quickly through his system.

I wouldn't want to drink from STD-infected people as well; it's amazing how a few well chosen words can suddenly make you feel a bit nauseous.

That was a wonderful moment between Alucard and Seras. Sometimes all a person needs is a good friend to be supportive, and Alucard hasn't really displayed that until now. Also, now they've both seen each other cry, so it's like their starting to stand on equal ground now. Of course, Seras still has a ways to go, but still, it's definitely progress.

Keep up the good work!
person TulasMia
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
In a word? Delicious.

In a procrastinating haze I wandered into this section of AFF.net. Having not been here in a while I poked around and by chance stumbled upon this not-so-little slice of heaven.

By the first chapter, I was intrigued. Chapter five? Enraptured. And finally by chapter ten I couldn't bear to shut the laptop and save the story for the morning. I finished all current sixty chapters in a matter of hours. My dear, you have pure talent! Writing like this is a rare find for me in the Hellsing genre. Even rarer that I find a story so fun to read it keeps me awake well past the time to pass out.

The story flows seamlessly from character to character, dialog all captivating and thought provoking to myself, the reader. The way Seras is portrayed as an evolving persona from 'clinging to a few shreds of humanity' at the start to gradually opening up under Alucard's influence is refreshing.

Clever foreshadowing I see going on with Seras and her 'heartbeat', hinting of many good things to come. I won't think on it too long and spoil the surprise for myself later on in future installments of your marvelous story...if my hunch turns out to be true!

Anywho, just dropping my review in to credit and laud you for your perfect portrayal of an ideal Alucard and Seras story. See this through to the end! I hope to read a wonderful conclusion to a brilliant piece of writing.

Adieu for now!

Tulas Mia
schedule October 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
so sorry i haven't reviewed in a bit, been traveling quite a bit. either way i caught up on the chapters i missed and what a magnificent job you have done so far! i can't wait for more!
person kai
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
It always makes my day to see an update even if it isn't as regularly as it first was, and I totally laughed out loud at the last line of chapter 59.
person Savaial
schedule October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, readers and reviewers! So busy, but I promise I'm not quitting.

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