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Such sadness and beauty combined in this story..well written mate I loved how Alucard recognised Seras'pain and didn't mock her but gently respected and understood her which is the only thing she really wanted :). I think that you can really see that it's not only a physical attraction anymore coming from Alucard towards Seras. He's sympathising with her and is her friend which is the foundation of every relationship. We all know he wants to fuck her, just keeping it real lol.I'm happy you didn't make a story where he suddenly out of nowwhere falls in love with seras and then screws her. Love grows and it is definately growing in this fic. I was missing Seras' compassionate side but totally found it again in this fic when she showed respect for the window. I Lol'd at the stinky penis though rofl brilliant! First the brilliant breasts now the stinky penis I cant wait for the next fic :D. Still praying for that Lemon but I know you got a plan ;) all in due time...all in due time and what a fun time it will be. Judging by the way you write and describe so well I can only imagine. Keep it up with the writting I'll be here...hoovering over my computer...waiting in the shadows for a new chapter (no life at all).

That was so awesome! I'm in love with this story; one of my favourite stories with one of my favourite pairings. You're an amazing writer.

I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading this, so keep it up.

As always, I love seeing updates on these. Something I'd like to see is a bit of intimate actions. You know what I mean. *hinthint winkwink say no more*
j/k. But for a way to go about it, have like a heated argument. Bring up "You could love Elizabetha so easily, what's wrong with me?" type of thing, and have like ... angry make-out session. Or a bit more with Anderson walking in and ruining it. Some ideas. :)

I both enjoy and at times hate your descriptive abilities...bleh, that was gross. *shutter* I like the development of their relationship and Seras' power with out it really being the main focus of the chapter. Keep up the good work. ^.~

So, that ruined my appetite as well haha

I truly enjoy the depth of the character background. Its nice to see someone exploring the past experiences that can explain the character we are accustomed too. You do this very nicely and VERY believably might I add.

Just curious if we will see Alucards hound form anytime? I know you mentioned it in passing a while back, but I just cant get the image of Dog chasing Cat out of my head. Maybe a little too comical for the type of story? lol Ahh well If only for my own amusement then ;)

Cant wait for more!

Hm, a short chapter, but a good chapter nonetheless. It's interesting how Anderson and probably the rest of the Iscariots literally carry the symbols of Judas around. I suppose that's a sign of their zealous faith in Catholicism, especially for Anderson since he's technically defrocked.

Hm, it seems that Seras's train of thought always slows down and focuses solely on Alucard every time they're close. I wonder if it's a part of their bond, or something that's unique to Seras... I liked seeing Alucard admit that he's confused about what kind of love Seras has for him, it shows how he has as much to learn about this relationship as Seras does. And Alucard would openly tell her that she has lovely breasts, tee hee...

I can't wait to see what happens next, keep up the good work!

I love this story, it has such a natural voice for the characters. And I love that you write out Anderson's accent.

Awesome update. I'm sorry I can't really think back to give you a comment on anything but that parting shot from Alucard...that drew all my attention. Lecherous old vampire. *giggles madly* Thank you once again for being and amazing author.

yeay! new chapters! I love how alucard is so erudite and cerebral one moment and then utterly base the next He's so refreshingly pithy... the 'you have lovely breasts' thing made me giggle a lot! Somehow even with deviating wildly from manga/ anime you've managed to keep his character utterly believable, so thankyou so much for keeping this story up! Also! Anderson's surly acceptance of his role as Seras' friend continues to amuse me deeply, but if you do anything horrible to Walter after totally selling me on him being young and sexy again, I'll be obliged to throw my hands up in despair :-)

Very well done. I do enjoy this story. Keep up the excellent work. I found this yesterday and spent my entire afternoon reading. I am eager to read more when it comes.