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October 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Sounds great! Keep up the great writing! Description was wonderful, so wonderful I felt like I was really there. The way you described Seras feelings was brilliant. Thank you for having one of the few good stories that are out there.
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just got finished reading all you have posted to this point and I have to say that you've really drawn me into this world. I really like the characterization you've done of everyone, it really makes me believe that they really would be in these situations and have these reactions. I honestly couldn't not finish reading it. You have a real talent when it comes to writing and you've made this flow beautifully. I can't wait for more! Thanks for letting us see into your imagination a little it's an interesting place to be.
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October 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is one of my favourite Hellsing stories ever! And believe me, I've read a lot! This story had me absolutely captivated on the first sentence! The way you depict their raw feelings, every one of the characters, especially Seras, the way you gave them voice and background in a way that make them feel more real to me than ever before was just incredible! Your form of showing their emotions is just so marvelous! The action scences are so beautifully described. I really like the way you make Alucard seem like a caring bastard I LOVE the interaction between him and Seras. It's intense and hot and I love how you portrayed their bond. I also can't wait to see what happens in the future as their relationship develops.
You are a fantastic author, amazing incredible and you must complete this story or else my heart will break.
You are a fantastic author, amazing incredible and you must complete this story or else my heart will break.
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm seriously in love with this story, all the twists and changes you've written are great as with the character dynamics. I love the way Seras and Alucard interact, how they're not really sure how they should be towards each other. The little exchange of words they had last chapter where she's all like “You could wait for me to spread my legs for years, admit it. This isn’t about sex at all.” that was awesome, 'cuz you know it's true =)
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October 22, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Man, this was a really good read overall. It was interesting and you kept the characters in character while carrying on with your original story. You even acknowledged the actual plot and I thought that was impressive. If this were an original story, I definitely would purchase the book in a store. I really think it's that good. I look forward to seeing where you take this.
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderfully written story. I really love the levels of love and affection between Seras and Alucard. It's portrayed subtly, and innocently with a spice of lust ever so often. I approve. :]
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i go on a break from reading fanfiction and i come back and find more than an update or two and i still can't stop reading. i believe in my only other review for this story i wrote states that i see you as a god of literature. that is still true and i place you as one of the higher up ones like poseidon or hera in greek mythology. choose the gender you pick. please update soon i can't wait to see what happens next and see if walters earache has any significance. i still bow down to your greatness of writing this fic and hope you don't stop anytime soon.
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I know you don't plan on turning poor Walter evil, so I wonder exactly what's happening to our badass butler?
Also, part of me is expecting Integra to know something about what happened with Vlad's castle reforming.
Also, part of me is expecting Integra to know something about what happened with Vlad's castle reforming.
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Im praying for walter...please dont make him a traitor i'm still getting over the fact that in the manga he really is one...give a girl a happy end ;_;. Loving the story i sense troubling in Turkey..btw you sneaky devil whats up with the tension building up towards a lemon and delaying it...its torture!! Alucard and Seras are all over each other it's crazy...I can't wait for the lemon which i think is going to be one kinky lemon seeing Seras behave so bold...*snickers in glee* Good story i'm always checking everyday if you update and yes i also curse when i have to wait more then 3 days(not angry at ya you have a life too and a good autor takes his time) but that's only because i loveeeee this story. Keep it up :)!
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October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really hope Walter isn't a traitor, that was always something that I didn't like about the manga. But it's really hard to tell if he is or isn't- for all I know, Walter could of purposely gotten sprayed with the Regenerist serum to become young again. But maybe youth isn't necessarily what traitor-Walter would be after... ugh, I'll be thinking about possible motives of traitor-Walter for a while.
^^ I liked the Girlycard moment; it's so wrong and yet so amusing that Alucard can transform like that...
Please continue!
^^ I liked the Girlycard moment; it's so wrong and yet so amusing that Alucard can transform like that...
Please continue!