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Another great chapter!

I love it when Seras embraces her true self!
Alucard is great!

The character development of the Judas Priest is also very interesting.
Do not care that much about the impending death/betrayal of our dear butler though.
I'd rather see more of the dark youth emerge there.

Cool seeing Seras gain new powers.
An animal form is cool, but let's not make this into a furry fic.

Favorite fic ever.

Ah, so I was sort of right about Seras's heart, not Anderson... Seras is a bit more compliant with her Master; in chapter 34 (such a long time ago, huh?) she had that fight with Alucard that broke all the furniture. But there has been hardly any back talk or anything. But I do like them better when they're in sync... maybe that's the point of Seras's evolution, to make her stronger and closer to Alucard.

The biting scene was fantastic, Seras hardly ever gets to be dominant. The last time she bit him (not on the plane, the time in the bath), there wasn't much difference in the master-servant relationship. I wonder if it's different this time around though; it felt a little different...

Thank you for being a wonderful author, keep up the good work!

Very good story, keep up the good work

this chapter is awesome, i really really liked it. Seras is a liones, bigger than normal. i didn't see that coming.
hope you have more soon.

Sorry..couldn't reach you on the website provided, but I do want to say that this story has kept me captivated..I've never seen alucard in such a sexual..yet powerful way..i hope to get to someday complete the story and see how our beloved vampires do...take care!!


Sincerely,

Amelia.....

You have me seriously hooked. How can I have not noticed this story sooner? I read it all in one day. I love how the plot progresses and how the characters are developing. I particularly liked the way you don't rush things between Seas and Alucard. I can't wait to read more about what you have in store for them.

Total rating: 10/10, A++++

Ah, a new chapter. Such a wonderful thing to see. Now, to start let me say that I thought Seras' attitude for the beginning of this Chapter was rather fitting. I for one feel the same anytime I get on a train. As for seeing Alucard stuffed into what can be described as a sardine can full of tasty little morsel made me laugh. A true test of his patience indeed. I also thought that his reaction to Seras' animal form were rather fitting as well. Enough of the little things though. Onto the true meat of the Chapter.

The thing that had me on edge with this Chapter and really gripping my seat was the conversation between Alucard and Anderson. It was also very refreshing to read. Anderson truly understands how much Seras feels about her master and by expressing it shows Alucard just how much it hurts her as it does helps her. It's also good to actually see the emotional side of Alucard. He knows very well that he doesn't deserve Seras, and I think it hurts him a little to know that despite everything that he is, he will never be good enough for her.

What's more, he understands that he's the reason her heart stopped beating, and that fact hurt him even more. He actually feels remorse over the fact that she may very well lose herself because of him, something that he hasn't felt in... ever, I think. That fact alone shows that he cares far more for her than he lets on. It's a good thing to see in him. And now I have to go. My own Bleach story is calling my name. Oh, and I do hope that Seras' heart starts again soon. Bye for now! SnK.

I don't know that I can give you any advice on bettering your writing, because I find yours to be much superior then anything I have ever attempted. I would just like to say, however, that I am enjoying reading your story and watching the many relationships develop. I love the way you portray all of your characters, and the depth that you give to them! Thank you!
LeAnne

a very nice chapter, but your jut a small tip, romanian is a bit off( Voi intotdeauna te iubesc, Maestru ) shold be (Te voi iubi intotdeauna, maestrul meu).
the rest though was excellent, they finally confessed and she's even forgiven.
please update more as soon as you can.