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by Savaial

person Sabaku no Kyuubi
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah, it is so good to see this story up and progressing with life again. I admit, that I have been making regular check-ups in hopes of seeing this masterpiece continued. Imagine my surprise and delight when I checked it today to see not one, but four wonderful Chapters added to an already wonderful piece of art.

My dear author, I must congratulate thee on a work well done. To be honest, there is really nothing that I can give in the way of constructive criticism, since your work here surpasses anything that any of my writings could possibly hope to be. All that said, I do hope to see more from you whenever you deem it possible. Bye for now! SnK.
person Astmara
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And here I thought the story will be abandoned, checking it only for good measure :D. Great work, as always, and am looking forward to more goodness.
person Matoska
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So very glad you are back and this story is moving forward. I must admit I missed you and this yarn. Since my fall an injury I have had little to look forward to but now I have my favorite story back once again. Hope things turned out well for you - I know it was hard. Thanks again.
person Angel Reaper
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The mental image of Anderson and Alucard casually chatting over a glass of wine while Seras is busy torturing her prey is a strange one, but still a bit funny and interesting. I also like the image of Alucard changing Anderson's appearance; I bet he would look fantastic as a teen goth priest... ^^

It seems to me that Seras is slowly becoming more sadistic, because each time she's in bloodlust she comes up with crazier, more gruesome ways to make them suffer first. Is it part of her evolution, a side effect to being with Alucard so much? I don't think it's necessarily bad that she's becoming this way, but I just hope it doesn't start to become her normal everyday personality.

Also, it's nice how you've been making so many little references back to previous chapters lately. It's like some things are coming full circle.

Well then, until next time! I can't wait for the next chapter!
schedule September 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
very hot and very gory, a perfect pair that compliment each other if done well. and you did very very well.
person shadow
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i'm so happy you posted 2 more chapters, they were great. i especially enjoyed the second one, the ending was very fun to red.
how you model the relation between Alucard and anderson is excellent, a little bit more and his got the priest completely tainted and on his side, can't wait for that to happen. i'm also looking forward to integra and walters wedding, yet most importantly at how the relationship between the 2 vampires will further evolve; if Alucard will ever tell Seras what she actually means to him, considering her feeling for him and all; and if they'll ever get to finally consummate the bond they share.

so good luck on writing more excellent chapters, will be waiting for them.
person Savaial
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks everyone, for reading and reviewing. I realize a lot of you might not like the direction I'm taking Anderson, and that you're impatient for the AxS smut, since you've waited a whole freekin year for it. I appreciate all this patience, I really do.
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Go Anderson! Whoot and Sera's too! can't wait for the next chappie.
person Big Al
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Another so soon! You work magic with your keyboard ;)
person OmegaX
schedule September 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Heh, part of me wants to wonder how Anderson can make a joke about Seras being jailbait with her epic bust somehow restrained in her outfit, but part of me thinks that it's not needed.


Regardless, Seras in black is much needed, and her perversity is slowly rising. I do wonder how the two will pass the time other than guarding the newly married couple, perhaps some bondage lessons?


Still can't believe that you're back, and updating as quickly as you have been!

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