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June 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I really love your story.
How you envision Alucard to be with his progene.
I love your pairings, and it's wonderfully long!!
It felt short and I didn'
I didn't want it to reach the end of the chapters that you had!
You scenery and play with characters is outstanding!
Love it!!
Please update!!!
Looking forward for more!!!
How you envision Alucard to be with his progene.
I love your pairings, and it's wonderfully long!!
It felt short and I didn'
I didn't want it to reach the end of the chapters that you had!
You scenery and play with characters is outstanding!
Love it!!
Please update!!!
Looking forward for more!!!
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May 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for your hard work; it's much appreciated.
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May 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just discovered your story today, and I absolutely adore it. I've already finish reading chapters 1 through 41. You portray Alucard well, very well in fact. And the devotion that Seras holds for Alucard amazing. Please do continue to write more, this story is amazing, I cannot wait for the next chapter.
Oh by the way, great job on your research. Not many people do that these days.
Oh by the way, great job on your research. Not many people do that these days.
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May 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
hey^^
i just found your fic two days ago; and i couldn't get enough of it♥ i love the way you describe seras' and alucards feelings towards another. unlike some other fics, he doesn't just notice his undying love for her. it has the right pace...(is it understandable??? unfortunately i don't use english in my daily life as much as i want to^^;)
i will be patiently waiting for the next chapter *bows*
luv ya♥♥♥
i just found your fic two days ago; and i couldn't get enough of it♥ i love the way you describe seras' and alucards feelings towards another. unlike some other fics, he doesn't just notice his undying love for her. it has the right pace...(is it understandable??? unfortunately i don't use english in my daily life as much as i want to^^;)
i will be patiently waiting for the next chapter *bows*
luv ya♥♥♥
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May 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
*bows*
that is an awesome and i have to say, one of the best in this fandom, if not the best!! i just rediscovered this fandom and i found your fic, you made the bar very high to find another fanfic as good as yours here
i love you characterization and evolution on their personalities as well as the relationship that Seras has with Walter, that really made it good for me not to mention Alucard and Integra's relationship as well as the budding romance, if we can call it that, between master and draculina....this was great, i hope you dont abandon it and that the fact that i review this (considering im too often a lurker fan) brings out the fact that i want to see the end of this so
work hard!!!
that is an awesome and i have to say, one of the best in this fandom, if not the best!! i just rediscovered this fandom and i found your fic, you made the bar very high to find another fanfic as good as yours here
i love you characterization and evolution on their personalities as well as the relationship that Seras has with Walter, that really made it good for me not to mention Alucard and Integra's relationship as well as the budding romance, if we can call it that, between master and draculina....this was great, i hope you dont abandon it and that the fact that i review this (considering im too often a lurker fan) brings out the fact that i want to see the end of this so
work hard!!!
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Loving this, so far!! It is actually very hard to find a good Seras/Alucard story, despite the show's popularity.
But, as I have said, I'm loving this one. Your style is just so well suited to the actual storyline, and flows splendidly. Honestly, I could really see this as being part of the actual 'Hellsing'. Maybe we should all come together and form a petition, asking the makers to add this to the storyline? What do you say? Ha, ha... Oh wishful thinking.
Actualy, in all honesty, I enjoy this MORE than the actual show/manga. I love the gritty, realistic sense of it. Your dark portrayal of the characters and their innermost feelings are very entertaining and believable. I can tell I'm going to be very sad when this is over. It's a good thing there are lots of long chapters for me to enjoy!!
I'll have to make sure I check out your profile when I'm done. I'm sure I'll find lots of other great pieces in there.
But, anyways, I'm going to shut up now, so that I have something left to say the next time I review.
Thanks for the great read!!
CR~
But, as I have said, I'm loving this one. Your style is just so well suited to the actual storyline, and flows splendidly. Honestly, I could really see this as being part of the actual 'Hellsing'. Maybe we should all come together and form a petition, asking the makers to add this to the storyline? What do you say? Ha, ha... Oh wishful thinking.
Actualy, in all honesty, I enjoy this MORE than the actual show/manga. I love the gritty, realistic sense of it. Your dark portrayal of the characters and their innermost feelings are very entertaining and believable. I can tell I'm going to be very sad when this is over. It's a good thing there are lots of long chapters for me to enjoy!!
I'll have to make sure I check out your profile when I'm done. I'm sure I'll find lots of other great pieces in there.
But, anyways, I'm going to shut up now, so that I have something left to say the next time I review.
Thanks for the great read!!
CR~
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely not!! You deserve more than just constructive criticism, in my opinion! I understand that you don't want to seem like a review glutton, but really, talent like yours deserves so much more than a bit of simple feedback. Good writing deserves praise, and you, dear, are a spectacular author!
I was absolutely flabbergasted when I read how little reviews you were getting. Apparently this warning got the message across, though, and I'm glad to see you are getting the numbers you deserve.
I totally agree with you, on that matter. I'm an author as well (not as good as you) but I feel for you. Any good author writes because they love to do so, not because they want the praise. However, what's the point of continuing if no one is expressing their feelings on your pieces? How is an author supposed to know if they are growing and getting better if no one leaves them feedback!!?? Sigh... so many people take us for granted. Not all, of course! There are tons of wonderful reviewers out there, and they are all godsends in my eyes!
But, anyways, on with the actual review.
I still love, it, though my adoration grows with each chapter. The powerful, sensual way you depict Alucard is very wonderfully done, and the transition you gave Victoria as well. It's good to see her go from the shy, reluctant vampire lamb she was to a true hunter. AND, I might add, you did the change exceptionally well. I've read so many stories where the authors have characters go from being meek to these super sexy, bad ass girls... and it always seems really stupid and poorly written and amateurish. Your method of doing so is really tasteful, however, and highly believable.
Keep up the good work!!!
Jay~
I was absolutely flabbergasted when I read how little reviews you were getting. Apparently this warning got the message across, though, and I'm glad to see you are getting the numbers you deserve.
I totally agree with you, on that matter. I'm an author as well (not as good as you) but I feel for you. Any good author writes because they love to do so, not because they want the praise. However, what's the point of continuing if no one is expressing their feelings on your pieces? How is an author supposed to know if they are growing and getting better if no one leaves them feedback!!?? Sigh... so many people take us for granted. Not all, of course! There are tons of wonderful reviewers out there, and they are all godsends in my eyes!
But, anyways, on with the actual review.
I still love, it, though my adoration grows with each chapter. The powerful, sensual way you depict Alucard is very wonderfully done, and the transition you gave Victoria as well. It's good to see her go from the shy, reluctant vampire lamb she was to a true hunter. AND, I might add, you did the change exceptionally well. I've read so many stories where the authors have characters go from being meek to these super sexy, bad ass girls... and it always seems really stupid and poorly written and amateurish. Your method of doing so is really tasteful, however, and highly believable.
Keep up the good work!!!
Jay~
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Whew, let me just wipe the sweat from my forehead... That was good, very nicely done. It was sexy. yet tasteful, my favorite kind of citrus.
So, still growing more fond of this story as I read more of it. :D I have to comment again on your superb writing. I truly enjoy this style, though I find most people cannot do it well. What I am referring to, of course, if the fact that I've noted most of this is dialogue based. Not that there isn't a bit of imagery and the like in there as well, but you know what I mean... I have come to notice that most authors who make their stories dialogue based tend to ramble, and much of it becomes pointless and boring. Yet everything that is said in this has a very strict purpose, each word elucidating new aspects to the story or uncovering hidden meanings. Very well done.
Also, I remember seeing one of your review responses at the beginning of a chapter a ways back. In it you stated something along the lines of how 'you thought your writing must suck sometimes'... To put it mildly, what the fuck are you talking about? SUCK??? You are a genius! A poet! The way you choose, place and use words is absolutely beautiful and astounding. It's rather impeccable, to me, and to hear that you think of your art in such a way is ridiculous!! I can see that you're somewhat modest, but please take this compliment as it is. You are INCREDIBLE! AMAZING! ASTONISHING! TOTALLY AND UTTERLY FLAWLESS!
Now, it could be simply because I've just been so enthralled in the writing, but I haven't even noticed a spelling or grammatical error as of yet, and that is quite a feat in itself. Please, I'm not saying you should brag. Stay modest, but there is no shame in knowing that you're good at something. Don't ever sell yourself short. A talent like yours is something to be proud of, so hold your head high!!
Keep it up!
J~ (aka Jay aka ChaoticReverie)
P.S. I simply added that because I noted that I have gone by a different name every time I review... so, just to clear things up... :P
So, still growing more fond of this story as I read more of it. :D I have to comment again on your superb writing. I truly enjoy this style, though I find most people cannot do it well. What I am referring to, of course, if the fact that I've noted most of this is dialogue based. Not that there isn't a bit of imagery and the like in there as well, but you know what I mean... I have come to notice that most authors who make their stories dialogue based tend to ramble, and much of it becomes pointless and boring. Yet everything that is said in this has a very strict purpose, each word elucidating new aspects to the story or uncovering hidden meanings. Very well done.
Also, I remember seeing one of your review responses at the beginning of a chapter a ways back. In it you stated something along the lines of how 'you thought your writing must suck sometimes'... To put it mildly, what the fuck are you talking about? SUCK??? You are a genius! A poet! The way you choose, place and use words is absolutely beautiful and astounding. It's rather impeccable, to me, and to hear that you think of your art in such a way is ridiculous!! I can see that you're somewhat modest, but please take this compliment as it is. You are INCREDIBLE! AMAZING! ASTONISHING! TOTALLY AND UTTERLY FLAWLESS!
Now, it could be simply because I've just been so enthralled in the writing, but I haven't even noticed a spelling or grammatical error as of yet, and that is quite a feat in itself. Please, I'm not saying you should brag. Stay modest, but there is no shame in knowing that you're good at something. Don't ever sell yourself short. A talent like yours is something to be proud of, so hold your head high!!
Keep it up!
J~ (aka Jay aka ChaoticReverie)
P.S. I simply added that because I noted that I have gone by a different name every time I review... so, just to clear things up... :P
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May 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Agh!! Of course I love your writing, and would never ask you to rush through a chapter... I just sincerely hope that it does not take too terribly long for you to post again. NO PRESSURE!! Do what you must to make it great, that's just me thinking out loud.
It's still fantastic, as I expected it to be, and I'm very anxious to see where you take this.
Waiting patiently...
Peace and well wishes to you and yours!
~J
It's still fantastic, as I expected it to be, and I'm very anxious to see where you take this.
Waiting patiently...
Peace and well wishes to you and yours!
~J
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May 8, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wah~ this story is so good. I've reread it a whole bunch of times. Can't wait for an update!!! <3