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this is awesome one of the best hellsing fanfics i have read so far and i have read about 200 plz update asap can't wait for more :D

Hihi its me agian im probably being a pest but i have really fallen in love with your story and would appreciate it if you would update soon. If there are problems with ur life, family, muse, exc. and it will be awhile before you update would u put up a notice or something or if gulp tears up you dont plan to finish please let me know so i can stop checking in
thanks alot your fangirl
stephy

so what was in the present? i dont rnember reading about it

I get to be the jerk and steal the 200th review. Ya see that, TWO HUNDRED reviews! Doesn't that make you grin in pride? No? Why the hell not? Do I need to fetch my stapler? You deserve every single one of those reviews even if I simply must turn a blind eye to chapter-you-know-what. It begs the question if begging/demanding for reviews results in a real review and not just an action or appease the writer, hm? Anyways, stapler!

Why so serious?

I'm kidding. Sugar does strange things to me.

Coveting high numbers wasn't the point of this review, if I haven't made that clear, which I haven't, but my previous reviews were simply fluff, right?

Anyways, the real review bit: I liked this chapter. I know you said that you were not happy with the last chapter, but that is the curse of being a writer. When the day we are content with what we create arrives then how would we ever improve? Or strive for improving, that is. I love the thinly veiled (ha) hostility between Alucard and Anderson. It doesn't seem like Anderson is putting up so much of a fight, though I suppose his sinful distraction (*snickers*) makes it quite difficult.

Alucard now knows that Seras worships the ground that Alucard walks (floats?) on. Though, he said how he was relieved (pleased?) to know that Seras wouldn't kill herself if he died. Really? I makes me wonder what she would do. Fall into a murderous rage, killing everyone but herself? Become depressed? Shrug and find someone else to bump uglies with? Choices, choices. Depends on the circumstances of his death, I suppose.

I'll have you know that checking this for an update is part of my daily ritual. Wake, turn on laptop, make bed, brush teeth, shower, return to laptop, checks for updates from bookmarked sites, hold thin hope of updated AFF stories, sobs is sad when none are found, continue with day, etc. Not to put any pressure on you or anything. Real life comes first. Pie knows I take my sweet time updating my own stories. *hides from angry mob hot on her tail*

And thus concludes review number 200, that is, unless someone beat me to the punch and kicked me to 201.

Smile,
Lady D

Vey much love this story. I can't wait to see what lies ahead. I love how you have Alucard, even if it is different at times from the anime. It's what makes him sorta like your own character ( though legally he isn't). Best of luck on the chapters to come.
Dark

I just read 27 chapters. I'm totally completely hooked!!!! Absolutely love it. Cute and tantalizing. I'll read the rest tomorrow [It's 1am and I need sleeppppp] ^_^ props~

Okay, so I read from ch 21 to 42 today [I'd read the first half yesterday] and it's so amazing and adorable and great and i love it ^_^ please keep up the great work!!!!!! ~much love

I'm SOOOOO sorry! I've read your story, and hadn't reviewed cause, well, I didn't have an account. Safari was screwed up, and wouldn't let me view any images, so I couldn't confirm the words, where they're like, 'oh, and to make sure you're not a virus, you've gotta tell us what this blurry image says'. Ah, the troubles I suffer. Either way, I literally made an account less than five minutes ago, and the first thing I did is review your story. Good Golly Greasy Grumpy Grimy Grouchy Green God! It's *kiss* fantastic! Amazing! Wonderful! If Jesus was reincarnated into a fanfiction, this would be him. UPLOAD! UPLOAD! UPLOAD UPLOAD UPLOAD UPLOAD! YAAAAAAAH!
P.S: I switched to Mozilla Firefox, so I could see images. Just if you were curius.

So. Yeah. This is amazing. So many reviews! Some things I love:

1. Your pacing is excellent. With such a long fic it's hard to keep things interesting, but you've managed to weave in the important information with enough action to keep us hooked.
2. Character development. You've managed to keep the characters believable. Perhaps a little stretched from the cannon, but plausible and that's all that matters in fanfiction.
3. Either you're amazing at writing first drafts or you (or beta) actually proofread. Such an important writing tool that is lost on so many fanfiction authors.

Keep up the good work, I eagerly await more.
(P.S. I'm actually reading Dracula for my Victorian to Modern Novels class and found the bits about Seras reading particularly fun)

God, it is so hard to find good AXS. And this is the best I've read. I've always thought AXS was far more intriguing that AXI because it has so much more potential for character growth where as AXI seems to have to stay static for it to remain IC at all. You have really created something special here. I love your OOC Alucard unlike other's I've read and it seems at least plausible for him to be this way and if not he should be, LOL.

Keep it up, please?

Your pacing and attention to detail are amazing. I read this all at one go and I wasn't bored for one second, but 40 or so chapters, and no sex yet... I wouldn't mind and after all... you are posting this on adult fanfiction.

I'm joking (sort of, I love well-written smut and I know you'll wow your readers when the time comes). I can't wait for your update no matter what. :D