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for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

person DR. Jinxers
schedule February 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A stunning read, forty-two chapters of eloquently penned writing that is both believable and beautiful in its creation. You've done such an elegant job personifying all of the characters, and IMHO, keeping them Quite admirably IC, and I must say that I look forward to your future updates.

Thanks are due for such a pleasurable read.
person butabara
schedule February 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Every chapter leaves me salivating for more! You are a VERY gifted author. I most impatiently await an update!
person Savaial
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello and thank you to all my readers and reviewers. I do appreciate each and every one of you, believe me. After the stresses of family care it's nice to log onto this board and see what you all think of my silly shit.
As to the Romanian translations: I checked my useage several times with different translators and each time came up with something different. I am not Romanian. It's a beautiful language to hear spoken, but I don't think it carries over well for English, one of the clumsiest, most contradicting languages on Earth. Let me check my notes and write out what what he's "supposed" to be saying. I'll footnote it at the end of each chapter as I come to it, which might require back-reading, but at least you'll know what Alucard meant. I'll cut down on that confusing stuff in the future, I promise.
Again, thank you for reading, reviewing and taking the time to drop notes on this fic. I wish I could up[date more often these days, but it's just damn near impossible right now.
GV
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Good things are happening today. First I check out the car I'm getting for free, then I come home and see you updated. Keep going, this is great. And hope your mother is doing a lot better.
person Anon
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Fluffy^^ i'd like to see where this is going
person OmegaX
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A short chapter, but it tells so much.


Alucard finally opens up more to his wife, Seras gets some tutoring from Walter on cussing, and we finally get to see some of Walter's skill in a non murderous manner.

I like the angle you've used concerning Elisabetha. It's not something I would have thought to include, but it further strengthens the relationship between Alucard and Seras.

Also, she finally admits to her love and worship of him..... Hahah, I wonder how Alucard will have Seras worship Him in front of Anderson now?
person Angel Reaper
schedule February 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is probably dirty and wrong, but I started laughing when Seras said she liked her Master's firmness...

Anyway, it was very cool getting a glimpse of young-again Walter with Integra. I hope more moments like that come soon. And I definitely liked the revelation that Alucard never really considered himself human, and the bed scene. I wonder if Alucard plans to do anything since he knows Seras loves/worships him, or if he can do anything at all.

Hope your mom is doing well!
schedule February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Can't remember if I've reviewed before or not but here goes....

I really like this story...The way you have Seras' personality evolve subtlely is really good. I also like the way that you characterize the other players in this little drama.

Keep up the good work.
person Nicole
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just spent an hour or so reading this story straight through and it is fabulous! I would have left you a review for every chapter, but they would all read the same thing....
OMG THIS IS SO FREAKING AWESOME! YOU'RE A GREAT WRITER AND SHOULD NEVER STOP! CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!
So yeah, just wanted you to know that I absolutely LOVE this story and I have no idea if you've abandoned it or whatever (haven't checked when the last update was posted) but if you have, please reconsider because you truly are talented and this story truly is fantastic. I've been looking for a really entertaining Hellsing story for a long time and so far you're the cream of the crop.
person DemonCryQQ
schedule February 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ander-plant?. is that that Alucard try to turn Anderson into a vampire that would be kind of cool.
Love this fan fiction one of my fav so far and i have read them all chapter are a great length for how fast you update this fan fic one of the fasts writes i have seen that does not sound like much comeing from some one who has not said a thing tell now but i swear to god that you are the fastest updater there is if i new any better. anyway like ever one above is saying you could slow down a little.

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