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I loved it. I had forgotten to check on it for a while and there were five new chapters! Your writing is wonderful and I especially loved Walter's new life. He was one of my favorite characters...

this is a great story but I came in around chapter 39 or 40 had come up(you kind updated fast on there for while). I try to review on the latest chapters if the story has alot of chapters. However I wanted to know what the words in romanian meant. So I tryed to find out or my self,and wound up try to learn the whole language by myself. (Thanks to free downloads.) This is what I got so far if you could email me and tell me what correct and whats not I'd be very happy

Singe-sotie= cheif wife
Ea datoria= she incumbent. ???
Singe-sotie mea esta bolnav= My wife is Sick!
Ai apartin la mine= of stateless is mine???
Din cauza ei= ???
Nu imi pasa= ???

It's ok if you slow the pace down, real life always takes priority over fanfic updates.

Anyway, it's morbidly fascinating how Alucard is trying to break Anderson down w/ the bondage and homosexual innuendos. I suppose it helps that Seras is there to counteract some of the more intense moments, otherwise I would be very freaked out. I did like the moment where Alucard suggested Seras seduce Anderson though, it made me laugh. Well, keep up the good work!

Oh yes....this one was great & I loved that it gave you so many things to think about & look forward to. I can't imagine what they are going to do with Alexander & I loved the fact that they forgot to feed him. I almost felt sorry for him....no food,his blood taken,no privacy & sexual harassment but then again....it kinda feels good to be mean to him. I like how you've given him more depth then the anime/manga Alexander. I love how A & S interact. It's been a while since they've spent any alone time.

I just read this whole thing in about two days. Very well written, interesting character interpretations. It's now one of my favorite Hellsing fics. Looking forward to more!

First off, it's not a problem about the delay, take your time my friend. I'll take the time to read whenever a new chapter rises forth, regardless of the wait.

Onto the chapter itself, is Alucard's working of Anderson an attempt to warm Seras up to bondage, by showing it in a casual light? Or is it merely to humiliate Anderson? Either way, it's hilarious!

Again, you've hinted at something I've always seen, both in Hellsing, and in the original Dracula, our beloved Count would have made a great pianist in his unlife, and I love how well you show that here.

Thanks, as always, for humoring me with my ideas from way back when, and as always, thank you for another chapter in what should be considered the Gold Standard for First Person Narrative, at least with the Hellsing series.


Always awaiting the newest chapters, your friend

Anonelbe

That's all right. I understand if you're in need of a break. I won't hold it against you. Much. *grin* Loved the chapter. The image of Anderson chained to Alucard made me choke on my salad. They're so funny together.

I liked this chapter. Out of all the Hellsing fanfics I've been reading (I think I've read all of them on this site this weekend) this is by far my favorite. You have a true mastery for character and plot, something that quite a few authors whose books sit on the shelves in Barnes and Noble seem to be lacking (and some who have simply lost it in their pursuit of money, lol).
I patiently await the next chapter.

Ahhh! I can't wait for him to break her! *giggles*

All I have to say is please don't push yourself to the point of exhaustion. I have known too many amazing authors who lose their passion for their works because of it. So fabulous as always! I eagerly await the next installment!

-May

Loving the story! I rarely find stories that make me smile while reading. That means that I am reading a worthwhile story and that makes me very happy and inspires me. Thanks.

-Reese (Digital Nogitsune)