AFF Fiction Portal

rate_review Reviews

for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

person Stephanie
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love your story everytime you update i stop whatever i am doing to read it the characters are fantastically well written go young walter an i like how you intergrated anderson into the story i would like to know more about the defrocking though please lol update soon please or my inner fangirl will cry
person Time
schedule February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your story is brilliant, it caught me from the very first chapters, I do hope you continue writing it, the plot twists are wonderful and i cannot wait to read more. honestly I have never bothered with fanfics more then a couple of chapters but this one is so good i can't stop reading!
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Loving that Walter is back in action! Keep up the great work and I hope your Mom gets better.
person Angel Reaper
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent new chapter. I really like it when Seras feeds, you do a really great job writing it. Extra bonus - Alucard and Seras being turned on by it. ^^

Anyway, Anderson seems to be getting quite comfortable w/ everyone at Hellsing, touching Seras and bantering w/ Walter and Alucard. I hope he doesn't convert over, or develop Stockholm Syndrome...
person Dier
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
beautiful story, I can't wait for the next chapters! Please, send more :)
person May
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow. All I can say is wow lol
I just read the whole damn thing and was cut off in the middle because I had to go to work. The only think I could think of was coming back to my desktop to finish this story!
The character interactions are written beautifully and I loved the twist of Seras being the one with the control, even though she didn't realize. I do have a question though, do you happen to have the translations for the Romanian? I would love it if maybe you could include a footnote next time you do it. I feel like im missing out on some funny dialogue :P
Keep writing, this is fabulous!
-May
person Selene VL
schedule February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Once again - I am so happy to see that you updated this story! I have fallen in love with the beautiful imagery and clever wording that you use, as well as the quite interesting and original storyline! =) Thank you so much for continuing this story - and bringing a smile to the face of a very busy English major. I cannot wait to read some more!
Sincerely,

Selene VL
person OmegaX
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Haha, is it me, or is our Paladin getting chummy with our beloved Organization of Vampire slayers?


More indirect orgasms for both Alucard and Seras.... when are the two ever going to finally seal the knot?


We so need a scene where Walter just goes batshit insane on a group of foes and totally violates their bodies with his wires. One shouldn't mess with the wife of the Angel of Death.....


Always awaiting the next chapter

Your friend, always

Anonelbe
person Thornwitch
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I notice that Anderson is still plenty holy, even after being defrocked. Enough so that his touch bothers Seras (or is that psychological?). Of course in the early days of Christianity, being a priest was much less "official" than with present-day Catholicism...

Since being a warrior priest/cusader is like being a throwback to an earlier time, maybe our heroes can convince him to really get in touch with his roots- the ones from before 381 AD.

Ah, Bishonen Walter. Should give the Round Table a bit of a start next time Integra attenda a formal event!
schedule February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
AFF.net ATE my last few reviews just because I didnt realize I now have to input the 'prove Im not a bot' passcodes... CANADIAN RAGE!!

Fury aside, let me try to sum up my previous reviews...
I liked the AU-Xover, very surreal, I love watching the outcome of overlapping timestreams.
Funny that either way, whether by turning midian or becoming a regenerator, Walter still got the wrinkles off his face, that's some butler.
Im not sure I like how... Complacent (?) Anderson is being. I'd have expected him to scripteleport his way out of there by now. It's like he lost his zeal when he lost his status.

Glad to hear your mother is allright.

Chiao,
S-e-D

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?