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February 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD!!!! I love this fic to bits. It is interesting to finally see things from Seras' perspective and all the events that unfolds within this fanfiction. I especially love the last few chapter where sworn enemies are engaging in a relative civil sittings and Walter's transformation. Please keep up the good work :)
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is very nicely composed, and I just read all of Midian Evolution in one sitting even though I am tired and was meant to go to bed almost six hours ago. I would hope you continued to write it, because it is very enjoyable. I love the way the characters act, and the relationships that are forming.
Very well done, you have the gift of forming words into 'goodness' people would kill to read.
A fan.
Very well done, you have the gift of forming words into 'goodness' people would kill to read.
A fan.
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January 31, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was an awesome couple of chapters. I loved Walter's reaction to being changed. "Am I disfigured?" "Oh, dear". It was like the reverse of the Joker's unveil in the 90's Batman movie.
The transfusion was a great solution (are there universal recipients? I knew there were universal donors...?) And incidentally I like your storyline better than the one in the actual manga. Walter choosing to go bad and spending his ENTIRE LIFE in deep cover never made any sense to me.
Still kind of expecting Allucard to attempt to seduce all the rest of Hellsing. Could be both sexy and amusing. Seras is undoubtedly in the beginning stages of tempting Anderson over to the "dark side" with the overwhelming power of her cuteness. After all, she's the most human person in the entire cast, and is also sweet and adorable. And he's getting a ring-side seat.
I hope your mom is doing better.
Good luck, and keep writing!
The transfusion was a great solution (are there universal recipients? I knew there were universal donors...?) And incidentally I like your storyline better than the one in the actual manga. Walter choosing to go bad and spending his ENTIRE LIFE in deep cover never made any sense to me.
Still kind of expecting Allucard to attempt to seduce all the rest of Hellsing. Could be both sexy and amusing. Seras is undoubtedly in the beginning stages of tempting Anderson over to the "dark side" with the overwhelming power of her cuteness. After all, she's the most human person in the entire cast, and is also sweet and adorable. And he's getting a ring-side seat.
I hope your mom is doing better.
Good luck, and keep writing!
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I love the ending with Walter saying "Oh dear" after seeing Anderson.
I love this.
I love this.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have always looked forward to the part when Seras becomes the predator she is. She didn't grow up in some nice suburban neighborhood with white picket fence. But whenever I tried to come up with a story in my head, I could never imagine her doing it. Your story feels very natural, and kept Alucard's wicked playfulness and all his burden so real. I love your story! I haven't finished reading yet, but I really want to tell you that I am enjoying it so much and thank you!
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
A little play between Master and servant, the revived Walter, and Seras getting a glimpse of the Mangaverse. Overall, a great chapter.
I'm glad to see you addressed the issue so well with the versions of Walter, and I quite enjoyed Alucard's rebuttal of Anderson's claims that Seras is a child. Children with Double-D cups indeed. (D Cups fulled with Justice! Or perhaps crazy bondage fantasies?)
I somewhat hope that the Mangaverse stays where it is, only so that it doesn't disturb Seras' view on things here. Still though, I pity anything that tries to take on the Hellsing family now, and I almost pity the kids Integra and Walter will have..... that kid is going to have the parents from HELL!
I'm glad to see you addressed the issue so well with the versions of Walter, and I quite enjoyed Alucard's rebuttal of Anderson's claims that Seras is a child. Children with Double-D cups indeed. (D Cups fulled with Justice! Or perhaps crazy bondage fantasies?)
I somewhat hope that the Mangaverse stays where it is, only so that it doesn't disturb Seras' view on things here. Still though, I pity anything that tries to take on the Hellsing family now, and I almost pity the kids Integra and Walter will have..... that kid is going to have the parents from HELL!
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Walter young. I'm so grateful you saved him & I'm also glad Seras saw her other self. I don't know why I'm so relieved that your not taking that course . I much prefer yours & you've got wondering about so many things you've hinted towards. I was so excited to see another new chapter........I think I love you.
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
and it just keeps getting better and better...
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Or dear God. I pray every day for updates to this! This is BEAUTIFULLY well written! The characters are perfectly captured, and the chapter flow is seamed together just right. I can almost SEE the situations, rather than read about them. You have AMAZING talent. Not many people can do that. Maybe one day we'll see some of your published work.
Wonderful. Never, EVER stop writing, no matter what anybody else says. You have a gift, and I hope you nurture it.
If its not too much trouble, could you email me when you update? guni_tatsuhiko@yahoo.com
I dearly hope that you finish this, and can't wait for another update!
Amazed,
~Gwilwileth~
P.S. Thanks for the review of my story. After reading you work, it means a lot to know that a writer as brilliant as you appreciates my work, so THANK YOU!!
Wonderful. Never, EVER stop writing, no matter what anybody else says. You have a gift, and I hope you nurture it.
If its not too much trouble, could you email me when you update? guni_tatsuhiko@yahoo.com
I dearly hope that you finish this, and can't wait for another update!
Amazed,
~Gwilwileth~
P.S. Thanks for the review of my story. After reading you work, it means a lot to know that a writer as brilliant as you appreciates my work, so THANK YOU!!
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January 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have just found this fic after reading the manga and watching the anime; and I really like how you built up this alternative reality, and how you developed the characters. (And of course, it is nice to read about the hot Seras x Alucard action as well!) I really enjoy your fic!