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for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

person Anne Nonamous
schedule January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay. So for the last three days I have been reading this story, only stopping to go to work and to sleep (for a grand total of 10 hours in the last said three days). Your writing is impeccable and your characterization is perfect. Please don't feel bad that people don't review. It's not you. It's us. Adult fiction will always be that naughty thing we steal from our parents secret stashes. I read a lot of fanfics. I can say without hesitation, this fic is the cream of the crop. Don't stop. I'll be sitting by my computer like a kid in December waits by the chimney.
person Angel Reaper
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
First off, I'm really sorry to hear about your family's crisis. Thank goodness the worst is over. Family is always more important than a fanfic...

Anyway, I really enjoyed the new chapter. There was something disturbing yet intriguing about the whole "seducing Anderson" part, especially when he was willing to castrate himself. Then again, Alucard is just irresistible...

Well, I hope you find a good balance between time for writing and time for your family. I would really hate for you to stop writing this completely; I would be willing to wait for months as long as you kept writing until a satisfactory ending.
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm sure your readers missed you as I did. Good to have you back.

Great work! Very amusing!

KD
person Savaial
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thanks, readers! Maybe I'm repeating myself too much here, but I really do appreciate the traffic and replies.
person OmegaX
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hmm.... I wonder exactly why Anderson got deflocked? Maxwell's an idiot, but who knows, maybe he's making deals with the Werewolf producers?


As much as I'd love to see the Vatican coated in blood, we can't let Walter die, he has to introduce Integra to the many wonders of microfilament wire bondage!


Seras is finally starting to tease Alucard, and he seems to enjoy it for the most part. Although, I doubt Seras wants to enjoy herself with Anderson chained to the wall, regardless of what Alucard seems to want.

As always, awaiting the newest chapters. . .


Anonelbe
person Moleman
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter, I personally enjoy seeing the humanity in Integra, many of the other stories have her totally uncaring and you showed that underneath her cold exterior she's still just a worried young woman. That and the growing relationship between Alucard and Seres. Simply beautifully written.
person catcopy
schedule January 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see your back to writing, I missed reading your story. Ohhh how the plot thickens... So it wasnt Anderson, but maybe Maxwell. Anderson is going to get an eye full watching Alucard and Seras? He is going to hate that or is Alucard going to make him particapate, lol that he would hate. Laying down with 2 devils per say.
person OmegaX
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow.... first Islands and now Anderson? Hahaha, if he's this much power over the same sex, I wonder how badly Seras will gush once he turns his attentions upon her?


As I stated in my mail, It's great to have you back, and as always, I await the newest chapters


Always, Anonelbe
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Lovely update as always. :)

So sorry to hear about your mother. Best wishes to her health.
person lara5170
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
that was too much............... Alexander Anderson.

The mere suggestion of it brought tears to my eyes.......how do you think of such things.......

when I finally finished laughing I had to start the entire chapter over from the beginning ...............just considering it left me at a loss to find the place I left off.

----your the best
Lara

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