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for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Sammy (me) says (7:15 PM):
dldvjcxvjlcxjklcx ME updated!
BEWDS says (7:17 PM):
Updated?
Sammy says (7:17 PM):
KLJfklsdklfdsklfj UPDATED
Sammy says (7:17 PM):
*garbbles*
BEWDS says (7:18 PM):
O~oh!
BEWDS says (7:18 PM):
On AFF.
Sammy says (7:18 PM):
YES!

That sums it up nicely, yes? :P I'm glad you've returned. Makes my aching eyes bearable.

Smile,
Lady D
person Moleman
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Eeew... A insane catholic priest driven to homosexuality by a vampire while his wife watches... You've been reading some weird things... Awesome chapter, bit disturbing but funny. Sorry to hear about your mother, hope she gets well soon.
person mr_godot
schedule January 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jesus, that was just awesome. You to continue to accentuate the one thing that many screw up when detailing vampires- their delicate sensuality.

Also, getting a behind-the-scenes look at how Alucard is aware of how theatrical his appearances are was a lot of fun. I've never before read a story that makes me really believe that I'm getting a good feel for him.
person lara5170
schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Update ,,,,,, About the Author: Godvoltaire

I recieved an email today stating basically that after going out of town for a quick trip that unexpectedly became an extended stay to care for a parent & is, unfortunately, without internet connection. These were her actual words:
"So, 45 days or so from my "quick trip", I'm still not where I can write or reply to email."
"I wish I could write and post for you right now but I can't."
" All I can tell you is it won't be much longer (hopefully) before I'm home and able to write on Midian Evolution."
"If you want to help me, you can post what happened to me on the review thread on my fic."
I hope this posting helps.


schedule January 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, Lara. That is very appreciated. I was beginning to wonder and had to settle myself with reading the story over for the third time, heh...

But in any case, family is more important than stories. So, best wishes to godvoltaire and family.

Lady D
person Jessica
schedule January 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love it :D It is one of the few stories with first person writning I like! You are really talented and I hope I see mroe soon :)
person Reesechan
schedule January 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I am to lazy to log in also I cannot remember my password at the moment. I love this story. I can't wait until you update. I was up till 4 am reading most of this. I know the feeling on writing a story and getting no reviews. An author would like to know if anyone is reading it and liking it otherwise what is the point. That is probably why I haven't finished a couple of my stories. Mine are easy to find, it is under King of Bandit Jing or Jing King of bandits, Just look under reesechan. Keep up the gospider tood work.
person Angel Reaper
schedule January 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think I already said this in my last review, but your story is great; it's so great that I have been compulsively checking each day to see if you've updated with a new chapter (I don't normally do that with any fan fiction, even the good ones). And occasionally reading through it in one sitting, or revisiting my more favorite moments. Well, I hope you keep on writing...
person CaptainJay
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
God, the ending of Chapter 30 made me grin so wide it could have rivaled Alucard's. I love, love your writing. So much better than I could do! Keep it up!
schedule January 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading your story through for the second time. I don't think I've ever done that with any story so soon after the first read-through. I usually wait a month or more, partially forgetting about it, but then rediscovering all the wonders a second time. I couldn't resist, though, my anticipation taking control. This time I read ME more thoroughly, absorbing little details that I may have missed the first time I read through it. I love it just as much, if not more, than I did before.

I spent a little time translating some of the Romanian in your story. About a year ago I tried teaching myself the language. The most I can do is count to ten, recite the subject pronouns, some pronunciation, say "hello", "goodbye" and "he went to the cinema". The fact that I was enrolled in French Immersion for thirteen years plus a year of an entirely French college helps oodles with conjugating and other similar concepts. But anyways, it gave me something to do. :)

Just in case you haven't figured it out from my reviews, I'm really looking forward to your future updates. I've already added ME to my list of stories to constantly check for new updates.

Smile,
Lady Draculea

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