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Two for One Review Special!

Ch. 32: More info on Seras and Alucard's relationship, and revelations that Seras doesn't like to be in control. A good companion chapter to....

Ch. 33: Bonding TIME!!! A nice game of chess turns darker, thanks to Integral's actual BLUSHING! Also, her mind is in the gutter with Walter, haha. It seems Integral enjoys her butler more than she let on before, and a plan is hatched, Frustrate the men with teasing!


Pent up Alucard is not going to be a pretty site.....


As always, awaiting the newest chapters,


Anonelbe

An awesome chapter, it captures Integra's bubbly bride persona perfectly. Well done.

Y'know, one of my favorite things about this story is that It's Seras-centric, but you don't feel the need to make Integra into a cold, unfeeling, evil Bitch. I've always been extremely bothered that so many authors can't seem to write about a female character, particularly a secondary one, without bashing the other female characters. I really enjoy the Alucard/Integra relationship, which seems highly symbiotic on both sides, and you portray it beautifully.

I'm also glad Seras and Integra are going shopping together. Both of them are in serious need of positive female influence in their lives. I felt like thier relationship (almost entirely platonic) was only hinted at in the Anime and the manga I've written. Seras needs a sane, morally grounded mentor, and Integra needs to learn how to be comfortable with her femininity.

catcopy, thanks for reading and reviewing! I appreaciate your detailed thoughts on the fic. There's no better incentive to write than knowing one has a few people who look for updates.


Anonelbe, thanks! Lol, poor Alucard can't let go of past bias.


Rose, thank you! I'm not sure how OOC my representation is, so your review is comforting. Thanks for taking the time to review.


Cherii, I appreciate the R & R. Hope to keep you entertained.
omg!! this story is awesome!!!! your doing a very good job with the plot and everything too!

Another Early Morning Review Special!

Seras gets a bit of reading done, and sadly realizes the fact that our beloved Walter is mortal (Or seems so, anyway)

I agree with her analysis of him, as it seems to fit him to a "T"

One thing I meant to ask, is Seras mistaken in assuming she's a No-Life Queen? I kind of get that feeling, but I'm not fully sure.


As always, eagerly awaiting the newest chapters


Anonelbe


P.S. Sorry about the short review last time, my power kept on going out due to a winter storm, and I didn't want to loose any progress, it seems I did anyway.

HAH! That was perfect, just bloody perfect. Can't stop grinning! That's how it ought to have happen, if ever between them. Has to be violent and blood-soaked.

So, is Serras going to spread her wings of blood now? You know, full-fledged and all? Can't wait for the next chapter.

Chiao

catcopy, wouldn't you hate to clean up after vampires? Poor Walter. Hope to write better sex scenes in the near future. Thanks for the R&R!

Anonelbe, thanks for reading and reviewing! I figured it was time for a little aggression on Seras' part. Flair and swagger seems very much a part of his character, wouldn't you agree?
I'm not taking your bet, because I know she wants more, lol.

Thornwich, I love Walter, too. I think it would be difficult to rattle him, I mean REALLY rattle him. Got some bonding time coming up with Seras and Integra. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

1moleman, thank you! I try to update every day before 8:00am EST. Glad you like the fic. Stay tuned!

Snake-eat-dog, thanks! The actual sex won't be far into the future. As far as Seras' abilities, they will continue to increase. She's not getting rid of her master, though.


Readers- Delayed with the next chapter until the afternoon, sorry. I hit some major snags this morning.

I know how Integra feels about shopping, its not my thing.... I was waiting for Seras to jump her for interupting her time and sleep with Alucard... I know I am a real witch when that happens to me, lol... Seras is becoming more agressive as this story progress and not the doormat the anime portrays her as, and I think its great. She has to be strong to be on the police force and now a vampire. I know I didnt start reviewing until you had written chapter 27 i think, but I had not gotten back to a computer for a few months and so when I saw your story for the first time you had already changed your mind and continued writing this fanfic and I am so glad you did... for the last few days I have jumped to the computer just to see the next chapter you posted, Thank you for continuing to write this :)

Visions, Alucard's rants on clothing and the Turks, and tantalizing hints of things to come


Personally, the entire bit between Alucard and Integral was hilarious, and perfectly done. You captured the interaction perfectly.

After just finding your work late last night and reading up to the latest update I would be doing you a dishonor if i didn't complement you on your works. I have found very few Alucard Seras pairings that actually capture the characters themselves. I have fallen in love with your story and am eagerly awaiting any future developments. Again, congratulations and thank you very much for putting this work up for others to see. It's been a very good read and looks to have a promising future. Once more, amazing story and keep it coming.You have gained a new fan