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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i really enjoy this story. you are a very talented author. i hope you update soon.
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
You're story is utterly brilliant, something worth while. You didn't cut immediately to throwing Seras and Alucard into a sex-driven relationship and I respect you for it. I like the tension you add, its genius. I hope to read more from you, you know what you're doing, you handle your business very well. Thank you for such a delightful story!
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i just wanted to say that your story is the best i've read on this site and i plan to continue reading it in the future. thank you for such an entertaining read.
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
BlackDesert, thanks for your comments! The mysterious group will become less mysterious in a few chapters.
Snake-eat-dog, I always thought they were particularly moody. I also enjoyed that scene of her as a child, confronting Alucard with her peashooter. I'm kinda going in a different way, though, because she's all grown up and has more subtle weapons at her disposal. As for the hand- My brother got his 3/4ths removed in a piece of farm equipment. It's going out of range to say a full recovery is possible, but he has some use of it. Thanks for commenting!
breet, thank you for the encouargement and the promise to read. I hope I don't disappoint.
Snake-eat-dog, I always thought they were particularly moody. I also enjoyed that scene of her as a child, confronting Alucard with her peashooter. I'm kinda going in a different way, though, because she's all grown up and has more subtle weapons at her disposal. As for the hand- My brother got his 3/4ths removed in a piece of farm equipment. It's going out of range to say a full recovery is possible, but he has some use of it. Thanks for commenting!
breet, thank you for the encouargement and the promise to read. I hope I don't disappoint.
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Early Morning review time!
I somewhat suspect that there's something about this cult that Integral isn't telling us, seeing Alucard's reaction to it. Hopefully we'll find out eventually.
More lovable badass Walter action never hurts, and it shows that deep down, we all want a Walter.
Also, I was curious as to why Alucard needed a new gun, but then it finally hit me, you're branching off the original anime, which is a PERFECT idea, as that version is really the closest we'll get to open A/S in the series.
Always great work,
Anonelbe
I somewhat suspect that there's something about this cult that Integral isn't telling us, seeing Alucard's reaction to it. Hopefully we'll find out eventually.
More lovable badass Walter action never hurts, and it shows that deep down, we all want a Walter.
Also, I was curious as to why Alucard needed a new gun, but then it finally hit me, you're branching off the original anime, which is a PERFECT idea, as that version is really the closest we'll get to open A/S in the series.
Always great work,
Anonelbe
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, a whole chapter and we're still in the dark about last chapters cliff. Awesome. Walter and stars? And Integra an Aries? Cool, me too.
=\ I'm pretty sure Walter's last name is Dolneaz though.
Yeee.... 3/4 huh? Damn, even worse than my uncle, lost a few whole fingers to a table saw. All I've lost is the tip of my right middle finger in a door fight with my brother. Almost squished my left middle finger flat in our garage door hinge, but stopped it in time to only squish it half-way flat, so it managed to return to normal size and shape.
Heheh... Anyway, chaio
=\ I'm pretty sure Walter's last name is Dolneaz though.
Yeee.... 3/4 huh? Damn, even worse than my uncle, lost a few whole fingers to a table saw. All I've lost is the tip of my right middle finger in a door fight with my brother. Almost squished my left middle finger flat in our garage door hinge, but stopped it in time to only squish it half-way flat, so it managed to return to normal size and shape.
Heheh... Anyway, chaio
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December 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love this fic to pieces. Especially the interaction between characters, very nicely done. So maybe they're a tad OOC, but hey, what fanfic isn't? Looking forward to seeing the next installment, add will definitely add to favs when ever I get around to making an account. Toddles!
-Frog & Mach
-Frog & Mach
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Anonelbe, what an interesting idea... Bondage Alucard does bondage, lol. I could make a meme for that. Thanks for your support!
BlackDesert, thanks for your encouragement! Yes, I will keep updating.
Matoska, well, good! Hope to continue the fic that way. You hit the nail on the head with the whole theme of the fic. Thanks for the feedback!
Snake-eat-dog, lol, well, it isn't quite the same for females. Yeah, you can get a hand put back on. The surgery would be out of this world difficult due to tendons and such, and the recovery would be longer than six months I believe, but I'd imagine Integra would have the best medical team available.
Thanks for the feedback!
BlackDesert, thanks for your encouragement! Yes, I will keep updating.
Matoska, well, good! Hope to continue the fic that way. You hit the nail on the head with the whole theme of the fic. Thanks for the feedback!
Snake-eat-dog, lol, well, it isn't quite the same for females. Yeah, you can get a hand put back on. The surgery would be out of this world difficult due to tendons and such, and the recovery would be longer than six months I believe, but I'd imagine Integra would have the best medical team available.
Thanks for the feedback!
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh-ow here comes trouble! ^_^ hmm but i wonder what that group is about!
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December 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hah, nice cliff. Alucard and Integra are a pair of moody sods lol. She ought to prove how much he doesn't scare her by blowing his fangs out of his mouth with her favorite silver magnum. Remind him of how she impressed him in the first place as a child. As for the hand surgery... Would the nerve connections really mend together?
Chiao
Chiao