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Oh My! so steamy, fresh, different and good! This is much better for building the relationship/ownership than the typical wham, bam, thank you Mam. Seras got it when in this chapter she mentions Alucard Evolving. She appears to make him more human and he makes her more vampire but in a good combination.

Serras's womb totally ROCKS dude! lol. Sweet chapter. Ah... I get a bad mental image though... Knee to the groin, ouch.
Can you really get a hand reattached?

Chiao

Huzzah! And finally, Alucard brings Seras to her first climax!

Expertly played, as always, and why can I see Seras getting into bondage with Alucard now?

love it! so glad you keep updating, the story really rocks ^_^

wow, you update so fast i can hardly keep up with you, but it's a really awesome story! ^_^ i'm sooooo glad you decided to continue

I like the Integra/Alucard/Seras relationship in this fic a lot. May I assume that Alucard is planning to make them (and possibly Walter) into his own little scary-ass vampy family at some point?

Seras seems just a little too okay with all the homicide, though.

I loved Integra listening to Alucard playing the piano, though I have to say it did seem a trifle ooc.

-TW

You might want to put a slightly edited version of this on fanfiction.net A lot of people gave up on adultfanfiction when the site wasn't working for a while. Plus a lot of the authors here won't let you review...

wiper, thank you for the motivation!


BlackDesert, thank you. I try to update every day. We'll see how long that lasts, as I'm sure to get a block sooner or later.


Thornwitch, thanks for the details. Alucard would like to make them all his progeny.
All of the characters are AU/AR, but maybe I should put up an OOC warning on my fic title. I can see him learning to play instruments over the long, boring years.
What did you mean by some of the authors not letting you review? I don't know if I can edit this enough for Fanfiction.net. I will give it some thought, but after registering there many moons ago, I saw they didn't allow adult content and I just dropped out... I like it here a lot better. ;-)

Thanx for good new chapters and contunuing writing of this story .o)

Just read chapter 12 and I agree with you. You play the fine line between asking blantly for feedback rather than begging for reviews in order to glorify a personal goal. As a reader, I've seen writers provide long-winded thank you at the beginning and end of their stories, beg for more feedback or put out personal review counts they hope to achieve.

How annoying.

However I don't deny that as a writer - to have no feedback is equally devastating and annoying.

My thoughts on your story:
- Alucard doesn't come off nearly as insane as I know him to be from the TV series, however I like this version of him
- I *love* the integration of the story Dracula into this fanfic though I haven't read the book and those do not know whether your interpretation of its characters are thoughtful and provoking, etc.
- A solid well paced fic I hope you continue.