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for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

person Nyssa
schedule June 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted you to know how much I love this story!!!! Your character development is amazing and I love how Seras and Alucard interact with each other, to be honest I am having a hard time expressing how much I love this story! ^.^ I really hope that you continue with this story because it is just amazing! If there was a way for me to favorite your story I would :)
person Cat
schedule June 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful wonderful story. It had me laughing and chuckling manically throughout the entire thing. Which from me is a compliment. The only thing I could ask is that you double check punctuation and grammar. There were a few errors in a few of the chapters. I don't remember exact instances but it's not a big thing and you can't always catch those the first few times through.

When is the rest of it coming out? I wanna hear what happens next. If you need help either with beta reading or writing it up please just give me a yell. I have nothing better to do with my time than read and write.

Hope to see more up soon.
person Juline
schedule June 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love this story!! This is, without a doubt, one of the BEST Helsing fics I've ever read. Certainly the best Alucard/Seres. I really like how you develop the characters, they aren't static or completly confusing like a lot of other fics. You really handle Alucard well too, I can enjoy him and really feel for him. I hope you finish this, and I eagerly await an update!!
person Darkyubaby
schedule June 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow, i love this story. update soon. I've invested 4 days into reading this. don't stop now. ^^
person RJK
schedule May 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've just finished reading each of the three stories (one story with 2 side stories?) and I have to say that between your character development, careful plot planning, and skill as a writer that this is the best Hellsing fanfic I've read. You make Seras bonded and desirous of her Master's pleasure without making her sycophantic. Integra is capable of being human and a woman while still being Sir Hellsing without turning into a weepy, clingy pile of mush. I like it. I especially like your manipulation of the Judas priest. You've managed what I thought was impossible through slow and careful plot and character manipulation. Again, I really like it. I noticed you haven't updated in a while and I hope it's simply because you're a little busy and not because you're abandoning the work. I'd really like to see where Seras and Alucard/Vlad go from here. I'd like to see if the fallen priest continues to build ties with Hellsing or if he is tempted back to Maxwell. Does Integra have twins? Is Walter's "condition" fully overcome and how did the tube come to be implanted in the first place? What about the werewolves? I'm awash with curiosity and anticipation!

Well done.

Walter C. Hellsing
Integra
person dojalo08
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story. I've kept up with it since the start. I wish you would come back...we miss you :)
schedule May 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really REALLY hope you finish this one because I am hooked! Wonderful plot progression and character development.
schedule April 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is the best fucking story ever!! I really, really, want you to update, PLEASE!! If you'd like I can draw a picture for the story.
person Jessica B
schedule April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
This is amazing. Full stop. Many people don't write the characters of Hellsing properly but you do; full of soul and deviant pleasure.
person Caz
schedule April 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I know it's been quite some time since you updated, but please, in the name of God continue this story!!! It's unbelievable!!! I have sped through this story, unable to put it down. You are amazing with the characters and plot. Please continue.

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