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for Midian Evolution

by Savaial

person Ella
schedule February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've loved what you've written so far. The balance of the natural dark Alucard that we all know and love mixed with his own internal struggle to understand the love Seras has for him. Unlike most fan fictions where he comes to love her in a snap of the fingers is nice but i much prefer to see the slow transition of him merely being proud of her to having some kind of feelings that he doesn't quite understand. It seems much more natural for him to find his ground in a span of chapters/time then for it to magically appear. Certainly he's sure of himself in some ways but now that he has Seras his view of himself has completely flipped in a way. Instead of just seeing a monster he's coming to terms with his more human emotions. Anyways I'll stop blabbing lol. I hope you haven't given up on this story. I would love to see the conclusion.

Ella.
person Kat
schedule February 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Okay, love this story. your version of alucard is refreshing...it still keeps some semblance of the original version but adds a unique flavor to him. I absolutely love this story because you don't see too many in-depth stories of Seras' relationship with Alucard. I like hows it seems both platonic and sensuous at the same time...very erotic in a sense. keep up the good work.
person Andi
schedule January 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
wow you are truly great at what you do and i must say your keeping me on the
edge i really cant wait for the next chapters
person Stephanie
schedule January 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've said it before and I will say it again I love this series! Every time i re-read it I like it more. The characters are amusing and the story is amazing. Please continue to write and update this story it is amazing and one of the best fanfics I have ever read (I've read A LOT of fanfics).
Your loving fangirl,
Stephanie :)
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg I just loovveee the story!! I can't wait to read the next chapter :D

-holds massive nosebleed and promptly passes out-
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I have just come across this story for the first time and I am completely hooked! Excellent plot development/pacing, character development and grammar usage! All aspects of this story are riveting and keep me intrigued and wanting more! Most importantly you have explained Alucard's personality and changes thereof to not make him out of character. You actually explain his development and why he is changing before Seras' eyes... I do hope you will consider continuing/completing this, it would be a crime for this to be abandoned. Its that good. Period. And it is now one of my absolute favorite Hellsing fanfics! Thank you, thank you, thank you! You are indeed talented!
schedule December 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great story. I've read it twice already I love the complexity of it. All your characters are true to form I really hope you're not done with this fic. Awesome job!!
person WiccaSilverFox
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are going to finish this wonderful story. It took me a day and a half to finish reading. You pictured every character perfectly. I am quite in suspense in wanting to know what happens further. My favorite parings were Integra and Walter, but my main favorite was Seras and Alucard, Vlad, etc. I may not know Romanian but I enjoyed...no more like...whats a perfect word for it...more like intrigued but greatful of using Dracul heritage of sorts. Especially the description of the tattoo and then the defintion of sentences at the end of each story. You are a very creative writer and so far are one of my favorites. Please dont EVER stop writing! I would have emailed but was having trouble finding the site but oh well.
person Julie Nault
schedule December 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love your story!!! It has to be the best Hellsing fan-fic that I've read so far. I hope you write more and I'll be checking to see if you do. Your story is perfect in every way and it fits in nicely with the actual show... I'm so happy =^.^= I finally found someone who can write a good addicting story that just never gets old. I have read everything so far about 8 times and it's still my favorite.
person Meduhsa
schedule December 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is bloody brilliant! Your use of dialog is structured very well. Your perspective of the characters and their evolution as individuals is unique and deeply engrossing. Your work reads so well that I haven't yet found something that I would offer a constructive critique on so you get only cookies of ego boostage for now. I'm planning on reading over the available chapters again to see if there's something missed that you may find useful to know about but I'm certain I'll get so deeply pulled back into the flow of the story-line that I'll miss anything worth noting.

I do hope you intend to finish this tale. When I hit the latest chapter and was forced to halt my journey with the characters I was actually very disappointed. However as a writer with her own life in chaos...I can most certainly relate to your burdens.

Be well and be kind to yourself. What you've offered to us here is, in my opinion, absolutely delectable.

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