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Beautiful story. You kept to the characters I know very well. I haven't had a chance yet to read the manga but this helps me want to start that task again. Thanks for the story. Keep up the good work.

wow that was great! just a few spelling/grammar probs but other wise vary well done XD

Aw, what a nice epilogue. It's very fitting for your story, I liked it very much. Overall, you wrote a pretty good story, I hope to see more of your work in the future. Keep up the good work!

nuuuu, that was sweet, in the funnest way ever XD I'm lookin' forward to the epilogue. I'm glad you posted this on here...I don't know if i'd have found it anywhere else XD too many on ff.net and all. anyway. Loved it, and I actually looked up the sayings online. not easy considering i couldn't figure out the language...but then again i'm surprised i was freaking surprised *rolls eyes at own stupidity* that was an awesome touch. I find it fun when a fan fic has the language of the character in it. ^_________^ Anyway,
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Okay, only on chappie 3...or four, can't remember right now. I'm lovein' it. It's really good, and I'm glad Batman Beyond could function as a good idea starter XD I loved that episode. It was one of the few i actually got to watch or can actually remember. Okay so it's four chapters. Anyway. You write very well. Your grammar is really good too, which I'm really sorry to say, it's actually kind of rare. Course it's all for fun, so who cares ne? anyway. one thing though, and my mom's got me to be a stickler for it, is it's "if i were" or "if that were the case" not was. I don't know why, so many people use it like that and I figure it is wrong, but who knows. That's all i have to say so far. Just tryin' to help and say i likes it. I'll probably review again after i'm done with the story up to where it is now ^^
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I hadn't read a Hellsing fic in a long time and I was apprehensive, I had gotten sick of them. Your is really good, I enjoyed the plot and everything and it is well written, I hope that you decide to continue

Hm, the use of Romanian is interesting. So far, I've only seen one other Hellsing fanfic that does that, "Midian Evolution" by godvoltaire. You could take it farther than just "my wife" and "I love you" though.

And actually, the penis is not a muscle. It's mostly fatty tissue, and when guys are aroused it fills with blood. I'm a girl, but I did pay attention in middle school health class...

Overall, I guess I liked the ritual scene. But I seriously question vampires being able to conceive children. It's a personal issue I have with any vampire story...

It's really commendable of you to update daily with a chapter or two, considering how most fanfiction authors take days or weeks or months.

Anyway, I do like the incorporation of music lyrics with Seras' feelings, but I hope you don't overuse songs. Songs should just be like a supplement to the emotions the character is feeling.

Plot-wise, it's great that Alucard and Seras have reconciled, even if Alucard did almost die. I do hope the ritual will happen soon... after the ritual, will the story end?

I like how the story has progressed so far, especially with the upcoming ritual. But I would like to see more of how post-series Alucard has changed emotionally or personality-wise since he came back. All we've seen so far is Alucard deciding that Seras is a good mate now, and making a few behavioral changes because of that. I just think that the whole ordeal of killing the souls within himself would change Alucard somehow. Well, I hope you keep on writing this story, it has great potential.

Hm, interesting story so far. I like your portrayal of post-series Seras, she's so confident and badass. Post-series Alucard is cool too. I'm looking forward to any more chapters you've got.